Yankee JK Kuzuhana-chan: Another Side of the Heroine - Ch. 4 - When Aoi met Nekomiya

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Some of Aoi faces look rough to look at, but at least the artist delivered on the ass shots.

This was a solid origin story of how the business class trio became friends. I'm glad Aoi was involved when Nekomiya was pushed down. It shows another reason why Aoi is an idol in her eyes.

Also, I can't believe the douche was about to slug Aoi! Itachi should've kicked his ass for attempting to do that. gett


Honestly, the entire business class is goated. All three of them are fun to read, especially Itachi.

Good chapter.
 
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Could use more proofreading and grammar checking - the school's name isn't "Monteshiro", for example.
 
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Page 22 second panel, Aoi's dialogue is grammatically incorrect. It should be something like "I've never wanted to fight."

Page 23 last panel has "your friends" instead of "you're friends".

Page 25 has a bunch of untranslated background text.
 
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Thanks for continuing to work on this. Who is that on the cover with Hanako?
 
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Page 22 second panel, Aoi's dialogue is grammatically incorrect. It should be something like "I've never wanted to fight."

Page 23 last panel has "your friends" instead of "you're friends".

Page 25 has a bunch of untranslated background text.
Thanks for the feedback. I’ll fix those up.
 

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