Like what the last guy said, stop using romanji in an English translation, not everyone reading this knows what they mean, plus it's also just straight up cringy.
Like if it's something that doesn't have an English equivalent then that's fine, but if it does, then use it.
(Idk if you guys change this in future chapters or not so I'm just saying my word for this one and the previous one)
Other than that it is a good translation, thank you