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E Elcief_SSN Dex-chan lover Joined Jul 22, 2020 Messages 920 Mar 23, 2026 #3 Felt a bit rushed. Could have drawn out a bit more. Anyeay we will see hoe vlong before it gets axed
Z zeronatsume Dex-chan lover Joined Oct 17, 2025 Messages 223 Mar 23, 2026 #4 a couple more pages to make the pacing feel a bit more natural wouldn't have been bad, but overall interesting start
a couple more pages to make the pacing feel a bit more natural wouldn't have been bad, but overall interesting start
K kenkagejack Dex-chan lover Joined Apr 24, 2018 Messages 488 Mar 24, 2026 #5 Hah, take that Op protag raised by undead / gods.
Forkuth Double-page supporter Joined Jul 5, 2025 Messages 439 Mar 24, 2026 #6 Typical slop would have him win easily. Im okay with OP power fantasy as long as theres some training or effort to explain power. Kid has potential but no training lets make him stronger works for me.
Typical slop would have him win easily. Im okay with OP power fantasy as long as theres some training or effort to explain power. Kid has potential but no training lets make him stronger works for me.
mayu_hojo Dex-chan lover Joined Jul 10, 2018 Messages 751 Yesterday at 11:50 PM #7 lowkey a lil generic with the writing quality & setting but at least it's earnest with what it's trying to do... i'll give it a shot.
lowkey a lil generic with the writing quality & setting but at least it's earnest with what it's trying to do... i'll give it a shot.
Shinigamisama Dex-chan lover Joined Jun 24, 2020 Messages 4,245 Today at 2:30 AM #8 The kid is wack, I like him. Congrats on becoming a dad, Begonia.