@Engineer_Tf2 I don't see why you changed the Gunma stuff on page 22. The original (Gunma and Gumma are fine; Gummma is bad) would've worked fine unchanged, while this talk of capital G, lowercase G doesn't really make sense, especially when you look at the images.
Also on page 23, in the third panel the guy is just continuing what he was saying in the second panel:
2nd panel: don't listen, don't speak, just turn around and leave...
3rd panel: if you want to safely finish your journey