ok that explain it. Maybe you could read it again before uploading it.
There are some mistakes with pronouns, and I'm pretty sure the sentence "I can see colours" (or smth like that) can be better, maybe need to look at how rook scans translated it.
The font is a little too bold for the confort of the readers.
Good job doing all of this alone, hope you can find someone to help you work on it (maybe working with rook, idk)t
ok that explain it. Maybe you could read it again before uploading it.
There are some mistakes with pronouns, and I'm pretty sure the sentence "I can see colours" (or smth like that) can be better, maybe need to look at how rook scans translated it.
The font is a little too bold for the confort of the readers.
Good job doing all of this alone, hope you can find someone to help you work on it (maybe working with rook, idk).
thank you so much As for the pronouns, I agree with you XD , I think I made a mistakes in some of them, I will try as much as possible to amend the mistakes and not repeat them in the next chapters.