Yuusha no Mago to Maou no Musume - Vol. 4 Ch. 19

[MangaDex]

 

[DementisXYZ]

I don't think there was anything wrong with the translation or proof reading, so I wonder... did the overall writing quality just dip? Maybe it's just me, but I had a hard time following just what was happening this chapter, as if they tried to throw a lot at once.

Who was the bird? Did hero already know her sisters were there? Why didn't she seem surprised? Why did she have to disguise as her sister under a blanket? What the hell is suddenly happening?

 

[onedumninja]

Molestation is so funny... fuck off man.

The demon princess is a mess right now. As far as she knows, sakurako is being assaulted and she's over there moping. I get that putting down the cute bird is sad as fuck and seeing all the dead demons is traumatic, but hold it in until you know sakurako is safe.

 

[onedumninja]

I don't think there was anything wrong with the translation or proof reading, so I wonder... did the overall writing quality just dip? Maybe it's just me, but I had a hard time following just what was happening this chapter, as if they tried to throw a lot at once.

Who was the bird? Did hero already know her sisters were there? Why didn't she seem surprised? Why did she have to disguise as her sister under a blanket? What the hell is suddenly happening?

The last part is unexplained as a chapter cliff hanger for intrigue.

First question. The bird showed them to the town. Sakurako was riding it in the desert after saving it from something. It was her friend in a way. Like it could have been her scooby doo it seems.

The writing has always been vague. The author assumes you'll fill in the blanks which is one of the writing choices of all time...

 

[Joddascus]

So many choices in the framing, dialogue, and character behavior this arc feel gross, for lack of a better word. It’s not like these things have always been incredible before now, but somehow there’s been an increase in ambient misogyny

 

[shemper]

Sakurako was so frustrating this chapter...
Thank you for your work!

 

[shinmera]

So many choices in the framing, dialogue, and character behavior this arc feel gross, for lack of a better word. It’s not like these things have always been incredible before now, but somehow there’s been an increase in ambient misogyny

Yeah it feels like something made in the 90s or 00s at the latest. Really bizarre.

 

[OnDeedolito]

So many choices in the framing, dialogue, and character behavior this arc feel gross, for lack of a better word. It’s not like these things have always been incredible before now, but somehow there’s been an increase in ambient misogyny

It has to be the wild west theme of this arc & firearms. Guaranteed to ruin a fantasy story, they infected the series with zombiebrain

The thing with this series is that it has a really nice potential setup with the characters and concepts (Darkneria's backstory = kino), but it just isn't handled well in many spots. The little demon girl and her sidekick that just appeared and is there for no reason, for example. It's a pity because much better story could be developed with the author's central ideas.
And to make it worse, raws are poor quality too.

 

[zymosan99]

It has to be the wild west theme of this arc & firearms. Guaranteed to ruin a fantasy story, they infected the series with zombiebrain

The thing with this series is that it has a really nice potential setup with the characters and concepts (Darkneria's backstory = kino), but it just isn't handled well in many spots. The little demon girl and her sidekick that just appeared and is there for no reason, for example. It's a pity because much better story could be developed with the author's central ideas.
And to make it worse, raws are poor quality too.

I guess its no wonder this got axed

 

[495Go]

I'm slowly getting why this got axed... such a good idea but seems like author only think in hentai all the time-