Zettai Maken no Sousen Duelist: Ansatsu Kizoku ga Dorei Reijou wo Ikusei Shitara, Majutsu-goroshi no Kyuukyoku ma Kenshi ni Sodatte Shimattanda ga - …

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This is kinda super ass, no wonder Galaxy dropped it. So we send alot of ch1.1 him being like "I'll be your everything and protect you" and suddenly ch1.2 he's all wondering what to do with her outside of everything he had previously said? So we go from she's useless at magic to suddenly the taliban lookin her way as a repeat bomber, I feel like if she harnessed that ability it'd b very powerful.

Also This was alot of chapters pages over the 2 parts to not tell alot of story. I'll give it like a chapter or 2 more but I'm probably gonna drop it if the first hcapter is this anus.
 
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Writing is somewhat slipshod. Author does okay with fights, but plot development is kinda haphazard. KS's efforts in this title aren't exactly stellar either. Since this is the very beginning, I'll hope that it's just one of those titles which have a rough/flat start and improve over time.
 

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