Shinmai Renkinjutsushi no Tenpo Keiei

[MangaDex]

 

[KajurN]

While i normally forgive copying other works, this is basically a ripoff of a generic Atelier game. Can't praise it for that.

 

[Arenesos]

While i normally forgive copying other works, this is basically a ripoff of a generic Atelier game. Can't praise it for that.

lmfao was boutta say that and I haven't even played the series, its just so obvious.

 

[Pietje013]

Seeing the same story on a different format is a bliss, especially when the events are way different.

 

[sanglyon]

Rorona? Sophie? No, Sarasa.

 

[Elaborate]

This ought to be better than it is. I give it 7/10.

The art and the pacing is meh.
While there's an occasional spark that shows the author has a brain, the plot as a whole is kinda boring. I mostly blame the artist for this, but the author could also have done better with their worldbuilding.

If we're getting details about part prices and stuff, we might as well get an economics lecture.
If alchemists are badasses, why doesn't everyone become an alchemist? Aren't there regular mages?

 

[bakadrone]

This ought to be better than it is. I give it 7/10.

The art and the pacing is meh.
While there's an occasional spark that shows the author has a brain, the plot as a whole is kinda boring. I mostly blame the artist for this, but the author could also have done better with their worldbuilding.

If we're getting details about part prices and stuff, we might as well get an economics lecture.
If alchemists are badasses, why doesn't everyone become an alchemist? Aren't there regular mages?

Not really defending the mediocre world building but at the very least alchemists aren't supposed to be badasses by this worlds logic it's just that she and her master are outliers on the top end of the spectrum. I'm actually wondering if the author has some kind of trauma with men as every villain is male and most are comically dumb