The Heroine’s Friend Strikes Back - Ch. 13

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An OG story in which the villainess had no heroine to stop her and ends up getting what she wants at the expense of everyone around her, a regression in which one of the minions is promoted to heroine. I admit, the concept is unique and interesting. The execution, not so much. Every crisis feels contrived, and is resolved in a chapter or two. It's unfortunate this idea didn't occur to a more skilled script writer. My biggest gripe is the useless second life inserted just to paint a Korean identity onto the MC.

I'll keep it in my reading list for now, but I'm not sure how long I'll keep it.
 
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An OG story in which the villainess had no heroine to stop her and ends up getting what she wants at the expense of everyone around her, a regression in which one of the minions is promoted to heroine. I admit, the concept is unique and interesting. The execution, not so much. Every crisis feels contrived, and is resolved in a chapter or two. It's unfortunate this idea didn't occur to a more skilled script writer. My biggest gripe is the useless second life inserted just to paint a Korean identityI onto the MC.

I'll keep it in my reading list for now, but I'm not sure how long I'll keep it.
I definitely agree with this, as every time a new issue gets brought up, it's immediately resolved, and there's no big problem. The idea sounds so good though, but like you said, there was no need for a second life, and it brings up all these plot holes like why doesn't she talk with modern day language, and she doesn't even use the knowledge from her second life.
Along with all the other plot holes, like the teachers just not existing for plot convenience. Also mouthwashing reference this chapter lol
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