everything looks alright to me!Please don't be shy to point out my mistakes I'll try to fix them as fast as I could.🥹🫠
🫡everything looks alright to me!
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Finally, best waifu appears, so lovely. I am satisfied.
Typical MC cluelessness. No idea what level their skills are relative to anyone else."Could it be that I'm actually a skilled craftsman now?"
Leave him alone!"Don't leave me alone!"
Dude, you're already at grave depth, digging deeper."Did I just dug my own grave?"
I'll try to fix that laterAh yes! For a web novel reader, this is a lot of new Eliza content! Excellent. It is important to show their connection considering what's coming...
You did a good job, asphyxiav2! If I have one quibble, on page 14, perhaps 'teasing' instead of 'bullying'?
whenever my brain thinks of this manga all I end up thinking about Potatos and Breeeeead
Do or do not, there is no trying.I'll try to fix that later
What page?That page... that must be the illustrator doing it on purpose...
Fuck@asphyxiav2
She's called Elize instead of Eliza on pages 12, 13 (x2) and 18 (x2).