Botsuraku Yotei Nanode, Kajishokunin wo Mezasu - Vol. 10 Ch. 55

[Kaarme]

This is such a potato of a story that the MC and FMC being tied into a romance by (sweet) potatoes is perfectly fitting.

 

[asphyxiav2]

@asphyxiav2
She's called Elize instead of Eliza on pages 12, 13 (x2) and 18 (x2).

Fixed*

 

[Bibliothecarius]

Thnks for the chapter!!!

 

[blablablub]

Money grubber

 

[YamiRi]

Kururi.. seriously.. the best girl is in front of you so take care of her. Stop ignoring her and pretending to be shy

 

[asfhoiasfjoiasfjpi]

return of best girl

 

[Arkuses]

Why would society thing sweet potatoes aren't noble foods?
It's legit one of the best foods in existence

 

[dextersTomato]

I tried in real life to do sweet potato eating with the girl i like, and I farted hard!!!

 

[Jstar338]

fuck it that's progress to me

 

[KingsMan12]

Youngsters tend to overstate their abilities. Sure. But at the same time, elders tend to understate the youngsters' abilities.

 

[Jackaboi_OwO]

Please don't be shy to point out my mistakes I'll try to fix them as fast as I could.🥹🫠

First time commenting on the MD forums because I needed to say THANK YOU HOLY SHIT

I genuinely thought this series was never going to get translated and I'd never be able to finish it, but thank you so much for continuing 😭

 

[asphyxiav2]

First time commenting on the MD forums because I needed to say THANK YOU HOLY SHIT

I genuinely thought this series was never going to get translated and I'd never be able to finish it, but thank you so much for continuing 😭

 

[Kirin-kun]

Seriously, find a proofreader who speaks English and eventually a quality checker.

"That's not Eliza... isn't she" isn't proper English.
"Ara", "Are" or "Aniki" are not English words.
The butler suddenly calls her "Elize"?
"Is there nothing on my face now" is weird wording. ("Is there anything left on my face")
"Were trying to make money together" (isn't a word missing?)
"Did I just dug" => tense is wrong => "Did I just dig".
"So I wanted Eliza to try it too" => Japanese wording. It's unnatural in English. You use "you" instead (and add ", Eliza." at the end if you want.
etc..
I didn't go over everything, this is just what I spotted with a cursory read.

On page 16, you typeset aside text by tilting it 90°. It looks bad. On page 17, you forgot to translate aside text altogether. You reverted the convention for thoughts and dialogues. Regular is for dialogue and Italics (or lighter font) is for thoughts. And your typesetting is iffy. The size of the font is too big compared to the size of the bubbles and makes them crowded.
The floating text parts, with just a tiny stroke, are barely legible.

I'm not saying this to discourage you and some people will probably say that it's "good enough", but as you don't have a very good command of English, mistakes you don't see are bound to slip in and awkward phrasing will look normal to you.

For the typesetting, look at other established groups, look for tutorials online, learn by example. And, yet again, recruit a proofreader.

 

[Valome]

One day Asphy is gonna miss remember names of one manga with names of another... Or he's already done it with Elize and just hasn't made translations for a manga with a character named Elize (how do I make the comment not automatically transform my emoticons to emoji dammit! Insert Biboo's face here but angy)

 

[tekkenshu7]

Hey! Thanks for trying your hand on this title. Great work as always!
So far this has around 96 chapters but it had to be dropped by former groups/TLs due to various reasons. Quite unfortunate because this is actually quite interesting and fun so far as it is a slightly different take on the 'isekaied to an otome game, now trying to escape the death route'. Though unlike the popular MobuSeka, we are still unsure what will happen to the supposed main heroine of the story but I guess Kururi is for now settled up his feelings about her and is pretty much focused on the should've-been villain of the story.

 

[asphyxiav2]

Hey! Thanks for trying your hand on this title. Great work as always!
So far this has around 96 chapters but it had to be dropped by former groups/TLs due to various reasons. Quite unfortunate because this is actually quite interesting and fun so far as it is a slightly different take on the 'isekaied to an otome game, now trying to escape the death route'. Though unlike the popular MobuSeka, we are still unsure what will happen to the supposed main heroine of the story but I guess Kururi is for now settled up his feelings about her and is pretty much focused on the should've-been villain of the story.

Still, thinking if I still should continue this one cuz it seems like I ain't improving in this story ngl.

 

[Dzrian]

Hopefully she has a better potato girl route than others.

Glad I wasn’t the I lay one thinking about Sasha. Rip my girl

 

[Chaos47]

Still, thinking if I still should continue this one cuz it seems like I ain't improving in this story ngl.

Don't give up, you're doing a serviceable job with the translation, and the story is finally getting some plot, so it'd be a shame to just up and quit at this point.

 

[asphyxiav2]

Don't give up, you're doing a serviceable job with the translation, and the story is finally getting some plot, so it'd be a shame to just up and quit at this point.

There will be an update this week please look forward to it🙇‍♂️

 

[Simpleton]

Hopefully she has a better potato girl route than others.

Confession-blocked by cooking (and eating) potato.