Onee-san ga Shin'ryakuchuu!? - Vol. 3 Ch. 24

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Glad this is back but I want to see the main couple, not some random lesbian sex. Let's just hope this new character won't end up molesting the main heroine.
 
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Nice to see a chapter after so long.
Really want to see Ao get into art school.
 
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So art people, I hear this criticism thrown around quite a bit, but does it ever have any actual substance? Like if I heard this my reaction would be "okay if I wanted that advice I'd buy a Costco-sized pack of fortune cookies thanks"
 
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So art people, I hear this criticism thrown around quite a bit, but does it ever have any actual substance? Like if I heard this my reaction would be "okay if I wanted that advice I'd buy a Costco-sized pack of fortune cookies thanks"
It doesn't. But for any substantial advice given by a character, author needs to be equally insightful for it to come across as natural. A smut mangaka obviously isn't that.
 
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It doesn't. But for any substantial advice given by a character, author needs to be equally insightful for it to come across as natural. A smut mangaka obviously isn't that.
This is a fundamental problem with many manga where an author tries to make anything deep, have a twist, do good foreshadowing, etc. It isn't even limited to smut mangaka. Not limited to manga either for that matter.

An author can never write a story or character more clever than themselves.
 
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God I hate chapters like these where its just a group of assholes fucking one another trying to bait MC into joining to cheat OR groups/people who think they are just better then MC

When all we want is to see MC with Main Girl and yet we get garbage instead OTL :shamihuh:
 

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