Yeah the beginning part of the chapter when he was still at home was weird. The Akari panels felt like she was moving forward in time with how quickly she was changing topics, but maybe that was intended.Holy shit this felt disjointed @_@
I dropped it for the reason I now don't remember but in wn version the one who actually segg him after all of this happen is the bodyguard of ln author whom he is editor of. I may be wrong tho.anyone read the LN, please spoil me
author: realism? f*ck it hahahaFrom here starts the karmic whel...
MC leaves the company for good, in the novel he is not leaving for the bad conditions but because the chief instantly believed NTR bastard lies, MC didn't really try to tell the actual facts but his direct boss not even asking him it was true or not was enough, in the manga she is super charmed but in the novel it was massive favouritism towards NTR assface that charmed every grl in the workplace.
Ex-wife tries to stop the divorce as NTR sob discarded her immediately, she realizing to not have anything on her own and not being able to return to her stern parents tried to make the marriage stay, but MC forces it, and as she cheated he doesn't have to pay anything, the girls reaction to knowing is because when they were waiting for MC they did see the cheaters and took pics, that then MC used as proof to make a quick divorce without alimony.
When she ended up withotu money she tried to return and force her way in the house, but MC had already left for another place and even changed the lock, bitch got the cops called on her, then started to go in hotels until she could find a job/solution, exhausted her money and tried to use a credit card she made without MC knowing, connected to his account, but as she did use it once and MC stopped letting things pass he had deactivated it, she started to go use manga bars to rest but made problems with the other customers because she was pissed, then got banned from every single one country/city wide, she became a prostitute as her parents refused to support a cheater.
NTR guy created problems in the company, he never tried to learn the job and MC had to fix things everytime he messed up with the writers, then gave MC the fault for not teaching him right, when he didn't listen and treated writers as inferior people, and that his opinion on how the story should go or illustrations should be was right, after MC leaves he continued to behave that way, that made writers leave one after another, the chief tried to fix things but was too late and for being weak to him she didn't fire him, tried to beg for MC return, that was of course refused.
His double timing almost every woman in the company gets discovered, and he is assaulted from everyone and finally kicked out, he tries to continue as gigolo but the womens network spread what happened, even the old and ugly ones started to refuse him, is revealed that he used a aphrodisiac for making the sex better, so when he ended up without money and change to charm girls he finally hit the wall, the author mistake on this character is that he was able to charm people with his talking, but for making the karma punishment work that ability was removed and he fucks up no stop after it, he tries to do some bad stuff at the end and goes to prison.
The girls left their home because their father tried to rape them, towards the end of the story they tried to talk with him but he only sees them as object and used violence literally on his doorstep, of course things were stopped from going on as the girls and MC didn't simply let things happen, another arrest.
This story is in the same universe of "The Teen Web Novelist is a Girl Magnet: Now My Crush Feels Bad for Rejecting Me!", for example that MC novel
is named several times, and his editor was brought up too, one of the few womens NTR guy was unable to charm.
There are some big events towards the end that
push the realism out the window, for example NTR guy in prison gets a short sentence, but he bothered the worng people and is put in a special program where he gets drug that messes up with his sense of time, so the sentence never ends.
The editor tried to act together with NTR guy in harming MC , gets found out, she is sent out in orbit on a exerimental craft as guinea pig, I thought that punihsment was too much, she wasn't a good person, but that was overkill.
Thanks to people in power really liking MC they make a harem law pass, so he gan marry the JK without problems (one of the writers is a daughter/niece of a massive conglomerate, NTR guy offended her greatly and she left the company istantly, her family that loves her moved to crush who bothered her, and it only escalates from there).
This sounds hilarious lmao. I can’t waitFrom here starts the karmic whel...
MC leaves the company for good, in the novel he is not leaving for the bad conditions but because the chief instantly believed NTR bastard lies, MC didn't really try to tell the actual facts but his direct boss not even asking him it was true or not was enough, in the manga she is super charmed but in the novel it was massive favouritism towards NTR assface that charmed every grl in the workplace.
Ex-wife tries to stop the divorce as NTR sob discarded her immediately, she realizing to not have anything on her own and not being able to return to her stern parents tried to make the marriage stay, but MC forces it, and as she cheated he doesn't have to pay anything, the girls reaction to knowing is because when they were waiting for MC they did see the cheaters and took pics, that then MC used as proof to make a quick divorce without alimony.
When she ended up withotu money she tried to return and force her way in the house, but MC had already left for another place and even changed the lock, bitch got the cops called on her, then started to go in hotels until she could find a job/solution, exhausted her money and tried to use a credit card she made without MC knowing, connected to his account, but as she did use it once and MC stopped letting things pass he had deactivated it, she started to go use manga bars to rest but made problems with the other customers because she was pissed, then got banned from every single one country/city wide, she became a prostitute as her parents refused to support a cheater.
NTR guy created problems in the company, he never tried to learn the job and MC had to fix things everytime he messed up with the writers, then gave MC the fault for not teaching him right, when he didn't listen and treated writers as inferior people, and that his opinion on how the story should go or illustrations should be was right, after MC leaves he continued to behave that way, that made writers leave one after another, the chief tried to fix things but was too late and for being weak to him she didn't fire him, tried to beg for MC return, that was of course refused.
His double timing almost every woman in the company gets discovered, and he is assaulted from everyone and finally kicked out, he tries to continue as gigolo but the womens network spread what happened, even the old and ugly ones started to refuse him, is revealed that he used a aphrodisiac for making the sex better, so when he ended up without money and change to charm girls he finally hit the wall, the author mistake on this character is that he was able to charm people with his talking, but for making the karma punishment work that ability was removed and he fucks up no stop after it, he tries to do some bad stuff at the end and goes to prison.
The girls left their home because their father tried to rape them, towards the end of the story they tried to talk with him but he only sees them as object and used violence literally on his doorstep, of course things were stopped from going on as the girls and MC didn't simply let things happen, another arrest.
This story is in the same universe of "The Teen Web Novelist is a Girl Magnet: Now My Crush Feels Bad for Rejecting Me!", for example that MC novel
is named several times, and his editor was brought up too, one of the few womens NTR guy was unable to charm.
There are some big events towards the end that
push the realism out the window, for example NTR guy in prison gets a short sentence, but he bothered the worng people and is put in a special program where he gets drug that messes up with his sense of time, so the sentence never ends.
The editor tried to act together with NTR guy in harming MC , gets found out, she is sent out in orbit on a exerimental craft as guinea pig, I thought that punihsment was too much, she wasn't a good person, but that was overkill.
Thanks to people in power really liking MC they make a harem law pass, so he gan marry the JK without problems (one of the writers is a daughter/niece of a massive conglomerate, NTR guy offended her greatly and she left the company istantly, her family that loves her moved to crush who bothered her, and it only escalates from there).
did they seriously say crap like "child-bride" or is this something the scanlators put in? if it's in the original, then that's really fucked up. coomer authors going full mask off lol
and whatever the fuck does that have to do with the child bride bs i mentioned?? they could just call themselves his bride and i'd less cringy."Second-child" and "First-child" are the sisters referring to their own relationship, being the younger (second) and older (first) child.
Very likely this was all MTL’d, a lot of the dialogue was pretty stiff imoI don't think the guy's nickname on the first few pages is "Karin", "Okarin" from Chapter 1 seems more correct.
Page 15's "kisoriver" also does not seem correct. Was this chapter MTL'd?
The other dude is banging them both and lied. It's pretty obvious with her blushing and all.Why did she know about the wife? she was quick to change to subject, but there's no reason she should've known his wife cheated on him. Feels shady.
Kisogawa and Kiso river in the same chapter