Translate SFX is cool and all, but don't stress it. with the clean/redraw too much. I use to do that, lot of work and you will wear out in long run, if i do it nowadays, i will just slap it on top of the RAW text, with big white stroke. It is fan translation that you read these panel in seconds anyways.
also,
Ultraninja please fix the page order, and i pretty sure at least 1 page is missing