Isekai Sniper wa Onna Senshi no Mofumofu Aigan Doubutsu - Vol. 5 Ch. 22 - The Princess's Transformation (Part 2)

[MangaDex]

 

[captain_crunch]

Tusken raiders, they walk in single file to hide their numbers. 👽

 

[Oberon-056]

I hate how suddenly this jumps right back into it... And I wonder if the People of the Kingdom basically got JUST as sick of this, considering that we can see from the current cover art that Mofuo has a DIFFERENT companion that looks to be a dragon girl of some kind?

I mean, the Princess basically surrendering the Kingdom to some ugly abomination? That not only will terminate ALL respect for the royal family, but since all the women succumbed to the Monster, AND the tamers, do you guys seriously think the people of the nation will trust women after this?

Even if it was due to brainwashing, the fact that the Evil Monster Tamers somehow made up this absurd concuction that ONLY affects women, just shows that whoever was, may have WANTED the men of the nation to lose respect for the women...

...And I HATE that. Raisa doesn't deserve to lose her dignity like this. Erika is a "Maybe", but this has gone far enough.

Whoever is handling the Translation, we can CLEARLY see that the Story's progressed so far ahead, that we can see it has gotten to VOLUME 9, While we have barely gotten into Volume FIVE!

 

[SeveralSolution]

Yum nice mind control

 

[popo53414]

it's joever

 

[ciera]

Thank you for the chapter

 

[RanmaChaos]

I hate how suddenly this jumps right back into it... And I wonder if the People of the Kingdom basically got JUST as sick of this, considering that we can see from the current cover art that Mofuo has a DIFFERENT companion that looks to be a dragon girl of some kind?

I mean, the Princess basically surrendering the Kingdom to some ugly abomination? That not only will terminate ALL respect for the royal family, but since all the women succumbed to the Monster, AND the tamers, do you guys seriously think the people of the nation will trust women after this?

Even if it was due to brainwashing, the fact that the Evil Monster Tamers somehow made up this absurd concuction that ONLY affects women, just shows that whoever was, may have WANTED the men of the nation to lose respect for the women...

...And I HATE that. Raisa doesn't deserve to lose her dignity like this. Erika is a "Maybe", but this has gone far enough.

Whoever is handling the Translation, we can CLEARLY see that the Story's progressed so far ahead, that we can see it has gotten to VOLUME 9, While we have barely gotten into Volume FIVE!

You are waaay overthinking and over estimating what this manga is. This is an ecchi, borderline H manga at the end of the day. Anything else is just set dressing.

 

[DemonHide]

Sounds like "lord bug" needs the Starship Troopers treatment (the movie, and maybe the book). And the princess needs to be deposed - she handed over the kingdom because ice magic doesn't exist, I guess.

 

[Goldni]

need more booba

 

[Oberon-056]

You are waaay overthinking and over estimating what this manga is. This is an ecchi, borderline H manga at the end of the day. Anything else is just set dressing.

Not when we're supposed to take it somewhat seriously.

If "It's all set-dressing", then it is better off as a One-shot where the females get Raped at the end.

Yes, I went there, but that is what you get when you have an "Ecchi where everything that isn't the Ecchi is Set dressing", it all ends with the female protagonists getting raped at the end.

Also, this ISN'T a "Borderline H Manga", this IS A HENTAI MANGA!

 

[sassinos]

MC is definitely a huge Arnie fan. First a Commando reference and now Predator.

I hate how suddenly this jumps right back into it... And I wonder if the People of the Kingdom basically got JUST as sick of this, considering that we can see from the current cover art that Mofuo has a DIFFERENT companion that looks to be a dragon girl of some kind?

I mean, the Princess basically surrendering the Kingdom to some ugly abomination? That not only will terminate ALL respect for the royal family, but since all the women succumbed to the Monster, AND the tamers, do you guys seriously think the people of the nation will trust women after this?

Even if it was due to brainwashing, the fact that the Evil Monster Tamers somehow made up this absurd concuction that ONLY affects women, just shows that whoever was, may have WANTED the men of the nation to lose respect for the women...

...And I HATE that. Raisa doesn't deserve to lose her dignity like this. Erika is a "Maybe", but this has gone far enough.

Have you considered to drop this series since all you do is complain about it every chapter? I mean, if you hate it so much why read it?

Whoever is handling the Translation, we can CLEARLY see that the Story's progressed so far ahead, that we can see it has gotten to VOLUME 9, While we have barely gotten into Volume FIVE!

I agree. Only four chapters within the last month? We should be getting a lot more than that considering how much money we have to pay for... Oh, wait a minute...

 

[Oberon-056]

Have you considered to drop this series since all you do is complain about it every chapter? I mean, if you hate it so much why read it?

One, Because I was promised Gun-fu and likable characters. Unfortunately, there is WAY too little gun usage for a story about a Supposed Gun-Nut, and an overdone focus on the ecchi.

And two, the only likable character so far has been Raisa (which is debatable right now), Mofuo, and the Fake Dog. Erika could get tossed into a meat grinder in the next chapter and I'd crack a morbid joke about "Wieners" with a big grin on my face.

And THIRDLY, I WANT it to improve... But then we have entities like YOU who turn a blind eye to ALL it's problems and don't ASK for improvement.

What is more,

Only four chapters within the last month?

NO. It has been FOUR CHAPTERS in the last TWO months... And that is a Pretty long time when the OG series is ALREADY on the NINETH Volume! We are not only JUST getting started on Volume Five on THIS MONTH, but it does so RIGHT ON A MAJOR CLIFFHANGER!

We were stuck for TWO MONTHS watching Raisa getting molested by a crowd of Ugly Gitz followed up by Erika getting molested by an ugly snail-onna, and ONLY NOW get thrown straight back into ANOTHER "Mission" where the girls are useless, and having the Literal PRINCESS give up the country to an Ugly Bug!

Why is this a problem? Because I have a habit of writing stories. When stuff like THIS happens, the Consequences would be SEVERE. The men of the Country just watched their supposedly strong and benign princess submit to an ugly bug for seemingly no reason, and only the WOMEN had been affected by this creature.

WHAT does that translate to, if you had even BOTHERED to THINK?

Also, there is a Simple rule of stories like these: Unless it's a one-shot, you NEED to have chapters that slow things down JUST a little. Non-Stop Ecchi or Hentai becomes a CHORE to dig through, especially when you don't have consequences or long-term effects on the characters, such as Raisa having nightmares of losing her chasity to a group of ugly men (It has been established since the chapter where Mofuo saved Raisa that Raisa's still a virgin), or Erika realizing that her humiliation in the last chapter was caused by her chasing away Mofuo because she couldn't handle his critique.

Heck, have ONE chapter dedicated to the girls and Mofuo having ONE quest where they get to show their stuff, WITHOUT going crater-shaped in some way! Have Raisa able to ACT like a Swordswoman, have Erika have her fighter moments, and of course, have Mofuo provide long-ranged Sniper support, something he only showed in ONE chapter!

And I am here, because I WANT this story to improve. The likes of Raisa and Mofuo DO work in a well-written story, and yet, because SOME people "Need their wanking material", their traits and character are left to ROT.

 

[barbatosproj]

One, Because I was promised Gun-fu and likable characters. Unfortunately, there is WAY too little gun usage for a story about a Supposed Gun-Nut, and an overdone focus on the ecchi.

And two, the only likable character so far has been Raisa (which is debatable right now), Mofuo, and the Fake Dog. Erika could get tossed into a meat grinder in the next chapter and I'd crack a morbid joke about "Wieners" with a big grin on my face.

And THIRDLY, I WANT it to improve... But then we have entities like YOU who turn a blind eye to ALL it's problems and don't ASK for improvement.

What is more,

NO. It has been FOUR CHAPTERS in the last TWO months... And that is a Pretty long time when the OG series is ALREADY on the NINETH Volume! We are not only JUST getting started on Volume Five on THIS MONTH, but it does so RIGHT ON A MAJOR CLIFFHANGER!

We were stuck for TWO MONTHS watching Raisa getting molested by a crowd of Ugly Gitz followed up by Erika getting molested by an ugly snail-onna, and ONLY NOW get thrown straight back into ANOTHER "Mission" where the girls are useless, and having the Literal PRINCESS give up the country to an Ugly Bug!

Why is this a problem? Because I have a habit of writing stories. When stuff like THIS happens, the Consequences would be SEVERE. The men of the Country just watched their supposedly strong and benign princess submit to an ugly bug for seemingly no reason, and only the WOMEN had been affected by this creature.

WHAT does that translate to, if you had even BOTHERED to THINK?

Also, there is a Simple rule of stories like these: Unless it's a one-shot, you NEED to have chapters that slow things down JUST a little. Non-Stop Ecchi or Hentai becomes a CHORE to dig through, especially when you don't have consequences or long-term effects on the characters, such as Raisa having nightmares of losing her chasity to a group of ugly men (It has been established since the chapter where Mofuo saved Raisa that Raisa's still a virgin), or Erika realizing that her humiliation in the last chapter was caused by her chasing away Mofuo because she couldn't handle his critique.

Heck, have ONE chapter dedicated to the girls and Mofuo having ONE quest where they get to show their stuff, WITHOUT going crater-shaped in some way! Have Raisa able to ACT like a Swordswoman, have Erika have her fighter moments, and of course, have Mofuo provide long-ranged Sniper support, something he only showed in ONE chapter!

And I am here, because I WANT this story to improve. The likes of Raisa and Mofuo DO work in a well-written story, and yet, because SOME people "Need their wanking material", their traits and character are left to ROT.

 

[Oberon-056]

I pointed it out because I was getting shite slung my way by someone who basically goes "It's Just Ecchi that borders on Hentai", ignoring that you can have Ecchi-Hentai, and you can ALSO have Good story.

Also, we haven't had any gunfu in a series that is supposed to involve Gunplay, and our supposed Heroines have become even more useless.

It has gotten BORING... And this is an ECCHI HENTAI! It's NOT SUPPOSED TO GET BORING!

 

[sassinos]

One, Because I was promised Gun-fu and likable characters. Unfortunately, there is WAY too little gun usage for a story about a Supposed Gun-Nut, and an overdone focus on the ecchi.

And two, the only likable character so far has been Raisa (which is debatable right now), Mofuo, and the Fake Dog. Erika could get tossed into a meat grinder in the next chapter and I'd crack a morbid joke about "Wieners" with a big grin on my face.

And THIRDLY, I WANT it to improve... But then we have entities like YOU who turn a blind eye to ALL it's problems and don't ASK for improvement.

What is more,

NO. It has been FOUR CHAPTERS in the last TWO months... And that is a Pretty long time when the OG series is ALREADY on the NINETH Volume! We are not only JUST getting started on Volume Five on THIS MONTH, but it does so RIGHT ON A MAJOR CLIFFHANGER!

We were stuck for TWO MONTHS watching Raisa getting molested by a crowd of Ugly Gitz followed up by Erika getting molested by an ugly snail-onna, and ONLY NOW get thrown straight back into ANOTHER "Mission" where the girls are useless, and having the Literal PRINCESS give up the country to an Ugly Bug!

Why is this a problem? Because I have a habit of writing stories. When stuff like THIS happens, the Consequences would be SEVERE. The men of the Country just watched their supposedly strong and benign princess submit to an ugly bug for seemingly no reason, and only the WOMEN had been affected by this creature.

WHAT does that translate to, if you had even BOTHERED to THINK?

Also, there is a Simple rule of stories like these: Unless it's a one-shot, you NEED to have chapters that slow things down JUST a little. Non-Stop Ecchi or Hentai becomes a CHORE to dig through, especially when you don't have consequences or long-term effects on the characters, such as Raisa having nightmares of losing her chasity to a group of ugly men (It has been established since the chapter where Mofuo saved Raisa that Raisa's still a virgin), or Erika realizing that her humiliation in the last chapter was caused by her chasing away Mofuo because she couldn't handle his critique.

Heck, have ONE chapter dedicated to the girls and Mofuo having ONE quest where they get to show their stuff, WITHOUT going crater-shaped in some way! Have Raisa able to ACT like a Swordswoman, have Erika have her fighter moments, and of course, have Mofuo provide long-ranged Sniper support, something he only showed in ONE chapter!

And I am here, because I WANT this story to improve. The likes of Raisa and Mofuo DO work in a well-written story, and yet, because SOME people "Need their wanking material", their traits and character are left to ROT.

Your name wouldn't happen to be Will, would it? Reading your post reminds me of a co-worker of mine.

That aside... you seem to have missed or simply ignored the part in my comment about the "money we have to pay". If it upsets you so much that crustyfire's free translation is this far behind the official JP release, you can always make a hefty donation on their ko-fi page to help spur things along. And be sure to eat healthy. Don't want that BPM getting too high, now, do we?

 

[Oberon-056]

Your name wouldn't happen to be Will, would it? Reading your post reminds me of a co-worker of mine.

That aside... you seem to have missed or simply ignored the part in my comment about the "money we have to pay". If it upsets you so much that crustyfire's free translation is this far behind the official JP release, you can always make a hefty donation on their ko-fi page to help spur things along. And be sure to eat healthy. Don't want that BPM getting too high, now, do we?

I am not american, and my name is NOT this "Will", and to be frank, the only one who clearly needs to eat healthy is YOU.

When was the last time you ate anything that wasn't Junk, Eh?

Also, if I HAD the funds, I would have provided it long ago, but I'm BROKE and CANNOT provide such funding!

How's about you stop rubbing your finanical situation into other people's faces, Eh? Ever thought of that? Course you DON'T!

 

[sassinos]

I am not american, and my name is NOT this "Will", and to be frank, the only one who clearly needs to eat healthy is YOU.

When was the last time you ate anything that wasn't Junk, Eh?

Well, I don't really care where you're from and what you eat. The "eat healthy" comment was nothing more than a jab because of how worked up you got over this whole thing.

Also, if I HAD the funds, I would have provided it long ago, but I'm BROKE and CANNOT provide such funding!

Hey, that makes two of us.

Anyway, I think I've had enough of this whole debacle and will end it with this. The first half of my initial reply to you was meant to be in good faith and was just an honest question since you came across as hating this series. The second half, not so much. You were whining about how someone who is providing you something for FREE is not working hard enough to give you MORE of the free stuff at a faster pace, despite the fact that they have no duty to do such a thing. No one is required to provide you with this free scanlation so read it, hate it, and complain about it all you want, but at least have the decency to be thankful for being given something you neither paid for nor do you deserve.

 

[mryellow362]

I mean knowing some of the author's previous work, this style of writing regarding the female MCs is nothing new

 

[Oberon-056]

I mean knowing some of the author's previous work, this style of writing regarding the female MCs is nothing new

Now I am glad I don't bother looking up this guy's works.

 

[Oberon-056]

Well, I don't really care where you're from and what you eat. The "eat healthy" comment was nothing more than a jab because of how worked up you got over this whole thing.

Says the Absolute Prat who calls this an "Ecchi Bordering on Hentai".

The next page is pretty much a Full-on Hentai, meaning you LIED TO EVERYONE.

Also, "In Good Faith"? YOU SAID NOTHING GOOD AND ONLY TURNED UP TO BE A SMUG BASTARD ABOUT EVERYTHING! YOU DON'T CARE ABOUT "GOOD WILL", YOU JUST WANT TO BE IN THE RIGHT, EVEN THOUGH YOU ARE PROVEN WRONG TIME AND TIME AGAIN!