Marriage Toxin - Ch. 132

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exactly as i feared, gero doesnt know how to simplify and now hes in charge of the flavour text :lul:
 
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This kinda muddle the water for me...
Doll user was the one that seemed to be messing with the treasure hunter at first, I think? But then at the end it looked like his mentor from the Poison Clan was the one behind it. And now we're back to doll user once again... I'm a bit confused on who's behind all these? Or there are A plot and B plot going on in parallel, but they are very similar to each other that someone is messing with his potential dates, just change who's behind each one? :questionblob:

exactly as i feared, gero doesnt know how to simplify and now hes in charge of the flavour text :lul:
He'll be able to do it, I think; you just need to showed him how it works first, and throw in a few examples (but probably not from Yugioh, lol)
 
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How on earth do you write characters with chemistry this good?

Right when she's all impressed at how great Gero is with his specialist friends, he shows vulnerability and asks for something only she can provide. Then, when he displays a problem at work, she finds the good in it and offers an opportunity catered to his strengths while reeling back the damaging aspect.

The biggest problem is that every one of the possible romantic connections is at this level. How am I supposed to choose my preferred winner when every pairing shines?! Also, Doll Man scary.
 
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