"Ano Toki Tasukete Itadaita Monster Musume desu." Isekai Ossan Kyoushi Totsuzen no Moteki ni Konwaku suru - Ch. 39

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So based off what we know, sensei is actually a master magician and one of the strongest people at the academy. Okay, sure, but your telling me with all the apparent mastery of magic he never figured out that Julius was a lich? You would think he'd at least notice undead magic permeating throughout the academy or something, I mean he taught monster girls you'd think this would kind of be his specialty.
 
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I’m actually curious for what the author has in store for Julius. Hopefully he’s not a throwaway villain.
With the way he's set up like an extremely powerful end-boss type (again, "lifeless king" or "elder lich") I highly doubt he's just going to end up a throwaway villain. The big problem I see is that he's a really terrible villain so setting him up as the main antagonist (even if just for a while) doesn't fill me with excitement. Establishing a villain like this isn't a bad thing in itself - like as much as this arc has sucked, at least stuff is happening in it even if really stupid and really slow-paced - but the issue is that Julius is written like complete trash.

He's super mysterious, super smart, always ahead of the others and planning around what other people are planning about him, and also a super undead that appears to be extremely powerful and functionally immortal. From a narrative tension aspect this basically means our OP teacher MC Washio is likely the only one that is remotely relevant in terms of an even conflict with the guy, leaving all other characters as "moral support" (aka useless).

Even in stories where both the good guy and bad guy are OP in comparison to the normal person, there can still be an interesting story told based on the beliefs and personalities clashing with each other. Unfortunately Julius fails there too, as he's just mysteriously evil for some reason that hasn't been given. All we know about him is that he deeply enjoys seeing others in despair... and that's it. No other motivations for doing what he's doing, nothing on why he's targeting the school, targeting Washio or his monstergirl students, etc. We can certainly sit here and speculate (as we have for many previous chapters), but the point is we're almost 40 chapters in and barely know anything about Washio or Julius (and they've barely interacted with each other prior to this) so the "conflict" between them feels extremely hollow.

This story really needs to either flesh out this character real soon, or drop him entirely - and I have a feeling that neither will happen.
 
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... The author really said: "Here's the final boss, but you can't fight him yet." Bruh, just make him leave and have a convincing enough note to show how dangerous he is. Do the ass-pull reveal of his astral body LATER down the line and show that he is an OP villain then.

The problem I have with this manga is that it's trying to do Shonen daily school life adventures, but the structure is really bad and with the amount of information it HAS to throw in to justify the actions of characters? Why bother with ALL of this convoluted crap, if it is needed to tell 1 singular arc?
 
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Sigh... just how much more plot armor can Julius have?
Now he's unkillable because he never had a body in the first place... this feels like a last minute addition to justify him not dying, there was ZERO foreshadowing for this "reveal."
 
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Thanks for keeping with it, even if slower.

I'm a bit surprised at the whole "elder lich" reveal. It's surprising that at a magic academy, apparently nobody was able to detect something like that.
 
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It's kinda fascinating that the professor jumps right into "the dude is a super ghost", as opposed to something more reasonable like some sort of illusion spell. Are there not more mundane spirits this freak could be, like a phantom or poltergeist? We're going right to the end-boss-sounding "lifeless king"/"elder lich"?
Next you'll ask how the hell the prof can see this now, but was unable to see that throughout the guy's tenure at the academy.
Look booba! Schoolgirl oppai! Pew-pew! Story? What story?
 
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With the way he's set up like an extremely powerful end-boss type (again, "lifeless king" or "elder lich") I highly doubt he's just going to end up a throwaway villain. The big problem I see is that he's a really terrible villain so setting him up as the main antagonist (even if just for a while) doesn't fill me with excitement. Establishing a villain like this isn't a bad thing in itself - like as much as this arc has sucked, at least stuff is happening in it even if really stupid and really slow-paced - but the issue is that Julius is written like complete trash.

He's super mysterious, super smart, always ahead of the others and planning around what other people are planning about him, and also a super undead that appears to be extremely powerful and functionally immortal. From a narrative tension aspect this basically means our OP teacher MC Washio is likely the only one that is remotely relevant in terms of an even conflict with the guy, leaving all other characters as "moral support" (aka useless).

Even in stories where both the good guy and bad guy are OP in comparison to the normal person, there can still be an interesting story told based on the beliefs and personalities clashing with each other. Unfortunately Julius fails there too, as he's just mysteriously evil for some reason that hasn't been given. All we know about him is that he deeply enjoys seeing others in despair... and that's it. No other motivations for doing what he's doing, nothing on why he's targeting the school, targeting Washio or his monstergirl students, etc. We can certainly sit here and speculate (as we have for many previous chapters), but the point is we're almost 40 chapters in and barely know anything about Washio or Julius (and they've barely interacted with each other prior to this) so the "conflict" between them feels extremely hollow.

This story really needs to either flesh out this character real soon, or drop him entirely - and I have a feeling that neither will happen.
The hero is only as good as the villain, so if the villain is trash, and the protagonist isn't good either...

But yeah, the only "I get a hard-on from DESPAIIIIIR" villain I can recently recall AND that's good is Kirio from Mairimashita! Iruma-kun. To be honest, he's just ok to me as a villain, but let's compare him to Julius:
  • Iruma befriended Kirio, or so he thought. So it hurts for Iruma once Kirio revealed his true self. For Washio, Julius messed with his students and... that's pretty much it. Not much prior interactions that we can see. It's a bit typical, but I'd rather have seen him have history with Washio in the old days while he was a hero.
  • Iruma can be "cowardly" I suppose, but he always stands up to defend his friends/family/school. Washio is spineless before, during, and after being accused and even left the school. Julius (which I assume is a nigh-immortal lich) causing DESPAIRRRR to a miserable character like Washio just feels bad, pathetic even.
  • We still don't know any of Julius' reasons for doing these things except being cartoonishly evil and the NTR bait. I'd have taken the typical "monstergirls are 'human' too!" VS "monstergirls will always be monsters and should be exterminated!" clash of ideologies any day rather than being evil for the lulz.
  • Another commenter says Julius will get away, meanwhile Kirio was caught although he got busted out earlier. A villain getting away without any repercussions is one of the most annoying things to happen in fiction. EDIT: I just recalled that elf teacher and that annoying student exist. They basically had no consequences for what they have done so that's at least THREE annoying characters existing within 39 chapters! Those two are even the antagonists in the chapters they first appeared...
 
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Usually you would setup the villain as being an unkillable undead to show how awesome the protagonist is for killing him in the following chapter, but I hsve no faith in the author doing so. Instead, I'm seriously worried he'll find a reason for Washio wanting to redeem Julius.
 

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