35-sai Dokushin Yamada, Isekai Mura ni Risou no Second House wo Tsukuritai ~Isekai to Genjitsu no Iitokodori Life~ - Vol. 1 Ch. 1.1

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man wth, looking at page 3 (and somewhat pg1 too)...it looks really weird, especially the lil girl with the wand and stuff. The whole page just looks weirdly "smooth" and inconsistent, just a bunch of stuff in that page just look weird.

I dont wanna assume, but well, yknow, what even is up with that lmao
 
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man wth, looking at page 3 (and somewhat pg1 too)...it looks really weird, especially the lil girl with the wand and stuff. The whole page just looks weirdly "smooth" and inconsistent, just a bunch of stuff in that page just look weird.

I dont wanna assume, but well, yknow, what even is up with that lmao
It's terrible AI upscaling. I mean just look at the cat.
 
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man wth, looking at page 3 (and somewhat pg1 too)...it looks really weird, especially the lil girl with the wand and stuff. The whole page just looks weirdly "smooth" and inconsistent, just a bunch of stuff in that page just look weird.

I dont wanna assume, but well, yknow, what even is up with that lmao
Not just you, it also looked...bad to me.

Also, TL/PR could use some work. In general, it's a good idea to get someone else to check your work. Proofreading your own sentences just doesn't work out. Page 2 alone needs some work:

I was raised by my grandparents, having lost my parents early on.
Personally, I'd switch the order around and start with the Having clause.
They were gentle, affectionate, and doted on me greatly
I forgot the original term for this, but you generally want to keep the words "similar" when laid out like this (3 nouns, verbs, gerunds, adjectives, etc.). Otherwise, just break them apart into 2 different sentences.
That door
Ellipsis here would've worked better, given how you structured your sentence.


Regardless, good luck with TL work and I hope you find good people to work with.
 
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Him exposition dumping his backstory to nobody was really clunky

there's been self narrations/introductions before but usually in a text box and not an outloud speech bubble. would be amusing if someone ever did that irl tho

maybe ppl have a habit of talking to themselves alone but if the artist could draw cute dogs/cats then giving him a pet to talk to would've been cute
 

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