Fantasy Bishoujo Juniku Ojisan to - Vol. 14 Ch. 204 - Fabiniku Ojisan And The Duel

[MangaDex]

 

[ZzombieNoel]

Really manly fight, initiate

 

[Fobban]

The ultimate flirting duel. Hoping the end result is three chapters of seggs.

 

[Morwitz]

Bro is really going to fuck bro, huh

 

[KTMT]

Been a while since a good old fashion game of sexy chicken.

 

[Needlef]

I need happy family ending

 

[MrIncognito]

On the last panel of page three... Is the right text in the right bubbles?

 

[Dekker]

The mass scanlate really helped this story point, so thank you!

 

[AccForManga]

Holy goddess thanks for the scanlation batch!

And pretty glad these two are back to normal. The switch arc was fun but seeing the characters as how they should be feels more right.

 

[CaDragon]

Not since Kaguya-sama have I been so invested in pure flirting.

 

[sevenseven]

waited 200 chapters to see peak and not for a single moment have i been disappointed. genderbend will be always be my top favorite tag

 

[Blackspace_2]

me and bro if we ever got isekaied

 

[snip36]

holy damn bulk of update. thanks!
Seeing a very assertive tachibana is really cute gdi

 

[LordofLeechers]

And so, they have become a baka couple that is openly flirting in public.

 

[JeezyHungry]

gay

 

[TheBigMonk]

Thanks for the volume drop!
The gender-swap really helps deepen their relationship.
Man or woman? It doesn't matter, it's still just two of them at the end of the day.

 

[asian_weeb]

There's a lot in this batch of chapters that could use the help of a proofreader who is a native English speaker, as some of the phrasings I see read like overly direct translations from Japanese, which doesn't always provide grammatically correct or pleasant-to-read English. Some specific examples from this chapter:

Page 3: "Well, since the challenge is thrown - accepted" is not proper English. Try "Well, since the gauntlet has been thrown down, I accept"
Page 4: Based on the images on the next page, "maybe have him lay his head on my lap and gently call me" is mistranslated. It should be "Maybe I'll have him offer his lap as a pillow and gently tell me..."
Page 6: "... Bad" should be "This is bad." Also, "'set' of behavior" is clunky phrasing that reads awkwardly to any native speaker. try "The problem is, I don't have any other tricks up my sleeve to charm him."
Page 12: "Bringing face so close... right now... we'll almost touch..." needs rewording. Try "Bringing your face so close to mine... you know, it's like we're about to kiss"

 

[UncannyLuck]

It has been 84 years...

 

[dbgecko]

This is going to end like Kaguya-sama where we flash forward to them in bed the next morning and they're both confused about how it happened.

 

[Luke_chase]

There's a lot in this batch of chapters that could use the help of a proofreader who is a native English speaker, as some of the phrasings I see read like overly direct translations from Japanese, which doesn't always provide grammatically correct or pleasant-to-read English. Some specific examples from this chapter:

Page 3: "Well, since the challenge is thrown - accepted" is not proper English. Try "Well, since the gauntlet has been thrown down, I accept"
Page 4: Based on the images on the next page, "maybe have him lay his head on my lap and gently call me" is mistranslated. It should be "Maybe I'll have him offer his lap as a pillow and gently tell me..."
Page 6: "... Bad" should be "This is bad." Also, "'set' of behavior" is clunky phrasing that reads awkwardly to any native speaker. try "The problem is, I don't have any other tricks up my sleeve to charm him."
Page 12: "Bringing face so close... right now... we'll almost touch..." needs rewording. Try "Bringing your face so close to mine... you know, it's like we're about to kiss"

Fr, if you don’t have a PR I’m sure there’s a ton of people who’d be willing to help out (myself included)
@Dianixi