...I do not understand what you mean? I have read the entirety of the Ashita no Scanlation chapters of this series and they read just fine? There wasn't any stilted-ness or outright bad grammar in their translation and the only bad thing that could be said is that there was some excessive verbiage in some of the speeches by the characters but it was not really noticeable.
What was your issue with Ashita no Scanlation's work on this series?