I think that this premise has a lot of potential, and a lot of the individual pieces we see here seem very much like the building blocks of an interesting story, but... I'm not really feeling it, I guess. The actual writing just doesn't seem to work here, and I think that this kind of deserves a better author.
That said, though, this is just the first chapter, and there are only three translated right now. Maybe it'll get better when the author gets more of a feel for the story and where its headed. So I might as well give it a chance. (Though the fact that this chapter already mentions that it's already on thin ice isn't a good sign. It's totally possible that the author won't even get the chance to figure things out.)