Jojoni Deremi ga Mashiteku Tsundere Gyaru - Ch. 47

[geistchevalier]

So is this a thinly disguise story about how annoying the NHK debt collector are?

I'm confused

 

[Kaito57]

I’m so confused but they had sex which is Nice.

 

[Dramamine]

Feels like a story idea that could've been interesting, but the execution was all over the place. Not entirely sure what the purpose of the door and his sudden confusion is supposed to exactly imply.

Is the door someone trying to 'break through' the loop? Is his confusion him partly realizing subconsciously something is wrong? Is he or Ayase secretly aware and neither wants to break the loop for some reason?

If the loop seems to be continuing in the next 'series', then I assume there's some end goal in mind which I'm admittedly curious about even if it turns to slop.

 

[velatic]

The definition of insanity is doing the same thing over and over expecting a different outcome

 

[Yeetmeister1111]

Spoiler

...and this manga's name is (The Tsundere Gal Whose Dere Side Gradually Increases) what the fuck is happening 😭

edit:

Spoiler

it seems mangaka regularly changes the title of the manga.

Are we sure it's us who is becoming disoriented instead of the fmc

 

[Chronigan]

This reminds me of a time loop hentai I read. Hope this has a better ending.

 

[sambenmaggie]

The series isn't deep and complex. It's just poorly paced and contains needless diversions. It was meh to begin with and totally lost the sauce half way through. The author clearly didn't have a firm idea behind and winged it, changing his mind along the way.

 

[eddkim]

i didn't realize hooking up with a gyaru was this complicated...

 

[meltworkzz]

What

*Insert matter McQueen meme

 

[Resound]

what? thats it? should i read it again so i can feel the time loop?

 

[koga88]

Well... this was an odd one. I would understand the memory loss thing being a retcon to try and spice things up but being a single page manga for that isn't the best. There were some "black boxes" and "black edged" speech bubbles in some pages that hinted something was unusual at times but nothing that explains the strange time loop aspect.

In the end, the art is good for the girl and there was potential in the story but it just doesn't work without more context/pages.

 

[Apep23]

Well isn’t this something eh? Thanks for actually finishing the series(?), it was alright even though it was nothing and without context no matter the way we see it

 

[Just_a_rock]

This series is not very good.

Thought the same. Feels like it's trying to be smart but the author doesn't know how to do that

 

[broadsword80]

also, when digging into mangaka's twitter account, it seems its best to not scanlate this further because this kind of story is involving "did i already posted this?", "whats going on?" type of thing on twitter. i dont know how am i supposed to present that to you guys.

Is the artist trying to go for something meta? Kind of a weird idea tbh.

Last chapter almost feels like she got her body snatched or something, maybe by another version of her. Kind of veering into horror.

Regardless, thanks for all the TLs.

 

[Geardofwario]

Thought the same. Feels like it's trying to be smart but the author doesn't know how to do that

This to be honest. This series felt like shit lol

 

[BakedBanana]

Well, that was trash. At least the art for the girl was good.

Menhera-chan chapter 22

 

[grumbles]

what the hell was that? that sucked

 

[Potatoo]

I'll be honest... just draw her in porn author, cause I cannot, for the love of me, understand what you're cooking

 

[jubuttib]

Ah, okay. I get it now. This whole thing was just supposed to be a massive waste of my fucking time. Lol, good one.

Head and shoulders above RaG tho...

 

[jonathaneze]

i cant follow the story

but at least the drawing is cute