Phony Fortune-Telling Gyaru - Ch. 38

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Ok I feel like this concept needs a refresh when the author knows what they actually want in the end because yes she’s amazing but it’s also really weak. This concept was only possible once we saw her break from the setting yet still rely on her character traits, so why not have a story that explores those traits?
 
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Ok I feel like this concept needs a refresh when the author knows what they actually want in the end because yes she’s amazing but it’s also really weak. This concept was only possible once we saw her break from the setting yet still rely on her character traits, so why not have a story that explores those traits?
She's a fortuneteller who can bring happiness to everyone but herself. This is her weaponizing it.
 
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She's a fortuneteller who can bring happiness to everyone but herself. This is her weaponizing it.
So the refresh goes about the author actually understanding and working it to explore her character traits more? Right, like sketches in a book, the revisit for a better incarnation still seems fine? This ‘weaponization’ is weak.
 

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