Fukushuuki Laura: Onee-sama o Ikenie ni Shita Kono Kuni wa Mou Iranai - Ch. 14.1

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It doesn't matter if you're possessed if the muscles in your arms are thought you can't move them because there's nothing to move them.
 
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While I am thankful for the TL pickup, the quality leaves a lot to be desired. Heavy tells of rushed MTL usage (wrong pronouns, ambiguous sentence, seemingly confused on whos speaking etc)

But the one thing I am most disappointed is the story. The initial premise was for Lola to join up with the Demons to rescue her sister. Of which we do get. But I was expecting that we would see Lola slowly integrating with the army using her unique saintly powers.

The last few chapters we are suddenly introduced with this... living weapon armament thing, demons can just do that. But also the holy sword. And now the plot revolves around this seemingly shoehorned power system of weapons + wielders, where in the beginning there were none of these people mentioned.

It just feels so forced by the writers/editors to make this more of a standard weekly battle shonen formula and Im not sure I like how it goes.
 
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While I am thankful for the TL pickup, the quality leaves a lot to be desired. Heavy tells of rushed MTL usage (wrong pronouns, ambiguous sentence, seemingly confused on whos speaking etc)

But the one thing I am most disappointed is the story. The initial premise was for Lola to join up with the Demons to rescue her sister. Of which we do get. But I was expecting that we would see Lola slowly integrating with the army using her unique saintly powers.

The last few chapters we are suddenly introduced with this... living weapon armament thing, demons can just do that. But also the holy sword. And now the plot revolves around this seemingly shoehorned power system of weapons + wielders, where in the beginning there were none of these people mentioned.

It just feels so forced by the writers/editors to make this more of a standard weekly battle shonen formula and Im not sure I like how it goes.
No need to be thankful when they're not putting in any effort. Though I have to admit this upload is actually not glaringly wrong unlike every single previous one.
Page 18 Last Panel...and I spoke to soon. How does "Hello." make sense here?
 
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the MTL is less to be desired, alas, im happy that i can see the design for Fina (?) at certain angle she would look likes a lady and her butler in the spirit possesion panels, thats so peak.
 

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