Love Revolution - Ch. 160

[MangaDex]

 

[Figroth]

Thanks for the translations! It does feel like you've improved. One thing I would point out for feedback is that in the early chapters it seemed like the pronouns would get mixed up every now and then (he into she and vice versa).

 

[RezaKingA]

Thanks for the translations! It does feel like you've improved. One thing I would point out for feedback is that in the early chapters it seemed like the pronouns would get mixed up every now and then (he into she and vice versa).

Thanks! Yeah, the first few chapters are not that good. I was splitting it up with a friend back then, so we'd just miss a bunch of pages, or we'd forget to proofread some parts. But now we've set up a system so it's a lot easier; he mostly proofreads and contextualizes stuff for me, and then I go in, clean it up, and add in the words.

Once we get to ch 250 I'm going to redo ch 145-152.