GraPara! - Vol. 14 Ch. 135 - Sex Scenes

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I wouldn't say Shinobu being neglectful towards her was justifiable, it just made sense to me that's why she turned (and cause of the toppy incident) I think it's a little unfair though cause people criticized immediately and the manga got canned. If it didn't and if people let the author cook maybe we would've had a chance to tell the story proper but oh well guess not~ we gotta blame the author for a bad ending when surely it wasn't the crybabies who cancelled it .

As for the saving Fumi thing, yeah it would've sucked if she got blackmailed onto seggs but it wouldn't be that surprising or that shocking considering the other girls in this series. It literally would've been normal all things considered and actually would've been better. Shinobu would still be with Sakura if he hadn't and be richer with a movie project. Again it would've sucked been evil but I READ THE MANGA AND LIKE 5 GIRLS DID SEGGS FOR BETTER ROLES COME ON.

There was NTR before with other characters 1 and 2 does no one like the idea of being edged nowadays? That's why I thoroughly enjoyed this series cause I wanted Sakura to fall and every bait was a tease an ahhhhhh maybe next time. Maybe I have patience for it maybe I like the edge but for those who wanted the NTR earlier like ... It's not a hentai
One most think it was axed before 128-129 two if it was cancelled because of the backlash from those chapters then Arir shouldn't have antagonized her reader base and figured out what her fan base wanted it's her fault for taking the story down a generic ass netorare rout that was done haphazardly two the only fans that matter are jp fans and if she pissed them off yet again it's her own damn fault!
 
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With those arguments, you seem to be defending KA, as if it were everyone else's fault that she wrote everything badly and the story is utter garbage because of everyone who doesn't "understand" it. The NTR bait was fine, but when she decided to go full NTR, she did it catastrophically wrong. Even NTR enjoyers complained. KA achieved something that seemed impossible: she united Vanilla Lovers and NTR lovers on the same team against her XD. And it's true, this isn't Hentai, but there are even some with better writing and development than this "conventional" manga.
She should what's the saying ? Know her audience!
 
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One most think it was axed before 128-129 two if it was cancelled because of the backlash from those chapters then Arir shouldn't have antagonized her reader base and figured out what her fan base wanted it's her fault for taking the story down a generic ass netorare rout that was done haphazardly two the only fans that matte are jp fans and if she pissed them off yet again it's her own damn fault!
Exactly, KA promised something that she ultimately failed to deliver; she herself reduced the whole thing to a generic level, she didn't change anything.
 
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I thought him using the pen was to represent him moving out from her, but still acknowledging the bond they once had, because he used the pen to make and perfect the scene for Fumi ... then author decides to piss on all the readers.

I remember from that monster girl manga when the author added NTR bait and his OC being cringe af, that the comments shared some JP people getting mad, and mentioning how they don't try to sh!t on the series on the manga site, but hory shit KA just made hundreds of people skip their respect to just dunk on her hahaha. Congrats
srsly wondering what kind of sh!t finale will pull to up the ante of shitty endings.
 
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If it was axed before 127+, then that begs the question why? Sales didn't look that bad. Sure it didn't do guilty circle types of numbers but 40k per volume is still not bad. so maybe something happened behind the scenes.

Anyway back to green yuri angst :aquadrink:
 
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I thought him using the pen was to represent him moving out from her, but still acknowledging the bond they once had, because he used the pen to make and perfect the scene for Fumi ... then author decides to piss on all the readers.

I remember from that monster girl manga when the author added NTR bait and his OC being cringe af, that the comments shared some JP people getting mad, and mentioning how they don't try to sh!t on the series on the manga site, but hory shit KA just made hundreds of people skip their respect to just dunk on her hahaha. Congrats
srsly wondering what kind of sh!t finale will pull to up the ante of shitty endings.
Wasn't that the Wolf Girl manga?
 
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I thought him using the pen was to represent him moving out from her, but still acknowledging the bond they once had, because he used the pen to make and perfect the scene for Fumi ... then author decides to piss on all the readers.

I remember from that monster girl manga when the author added NTR bait and his OC being cringe af, that the comments shared some JP people getting mad, and mentioning how they don't try to sh!t on the series on the manga site, but hory shit KA just made hundreds of people skip their respect to just dunk on her hahaha. Congrats
srsly wondering what kind of sh!t finale will pull to up the ante of shitty endings.
It is a bit funny how Shinobu has a rare heart to heart chat with Ryusei and then immediately makes a "mistake" afterwards, hope this doesn't go down the worst possible patch left for the endings.
 
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I wouldn't say Shinobu being neglectful towards her was justifiable, it just made sense to me that's why she turned (and cause of the toppy incident) I think it's a little unfair though cause people criticized immediately and the manga got canned. If it didn't and if people let the author cook maybe we would've had a chance to tell the story proper but oh well guess not~ we gotta blame the author for a bad ending when surely it wasn't the crybabies who cancelled it .

As for the saving Fumi thing, yeah it would've sucked if she got blackmailed onto seggs but it wouldn't be that surprising or that shocking considering the other girls in this series. It literally would've been normal all things considered and actually would've been better. Shinobu would still be with Sakura if he hadn't and be richer with a movie project. Again it would've sucked been evil but I READ THE MANGA AND LIKE 5 GIRLS DID SEGGS FOR BETTER ROLES COME ON.

There was NTR before with other characters 1 and 2 does no one like the idea of being edged nowadays? That's why I thoroughly enjoyed this series cause I wanted Sakura to fall and every bait was a tease an ahhhhhh maybe next time. Maybe I have patience for it maybe I like the edge but for those who wanted the NTR earlier like ... It's not a hentai
I did want to add that having Fumi get blackmailed imo would've been a better story if I HAD to criticize the author cause unlike the other girls in the series who did Seggs to get ahead. Fumi was gonna do it for someone else to get ahead. It would've also started the cracks in Shinobu and Sakura's relationship. Whereas Sakura hasn't done anything for the MC (aside from Seggs) she also gave signs that her feelings for Shinobu was wavering and Fumi comes in to give Shinobi this big break for a movie. It also would've been a good and evil NTR kinda vibe were Sakura cheats with Shinobu with Fuckboi and Fumi NTR Shinobu with investor to give Shinobu his movie.
 
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I thought him using the pen was to represent him moving out from her, but still acknowledging the bond they once had, because he used the pen to make and perfect the scene for Fumi ... then author decides to piss on all the readers.

I remember from that monster girl manga when the author added NTR bait and his OC being cringe af, that the comments shared some JP people getting mad, and mentioning how they don't try to sh!t on the series on the manga site, but hory shit KA just made hundreds of people skip their respect to just dunk on her hahaha. Congrats
srsly wondering what kind of sh!t finale will pull to up the ante of shitty endings.
Oh shit, I like your theory about the pen, it makes sense. Too bad the author had to ruin it.
 
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I'll be waiting for that manga to overtake Grapara Volume 13 in the weekly sales rankings. When it does, I'll be saying, "Well, that's embarrassing. The sales figures Katsura Airi were so proud of have already been surpassed by a manga that went on sale later than yours—in hardly any time at all."
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Ok GUYS actually clear it for me

Why was the cheating/NTR plot "bad"

Ive heard it was rushed - I said it wasn't it took 10~ ish chapters and every instance throughout the manga anyone trying to get with Sakura also had that "rush vibe" if not worst there's a chapter early on were Sakura sees this guy with a huge cock censor (pretty funny there's a comedy) and like the next chapter or 2 he ends up fingering her like ? BUT THAT WASN'T RUSHED?

I've heard the misunderstanding - i don't think it was JUST the misunderstanding. Again Shinobu went soft on her and neglected her for a couple chapters. Plus the Fuckboi found Sakura's pen gift so it's not like he was some irrelevant character either

What other reason?
I do blame the readers cause like I really don't understand how anyone picks up this manga from the beginning reads 5-10 chapters even and go "this is gonna be a really good normal RomCom"
Thats like me watching Goblin Slayer the first episode then I continue to watch and I'm like "eh why is there so much goblin rape in this series. I thought it was gonna be a normal fantasy series what is this garbage" no
 
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Ok GUYS actually clear it for me

Why was the cheating/NTR plot "bad"

Ive heard it was rushed - I said it wasn't it took 10~ ish chapters and every instance throughout the manga anyone trying to get with Sakura also had that "rush vibe" if not worst there's a chapter early on were Sakura sees this guy with a huge cock censor (pretty funny there's a comedy) and like the next chapter or 2 he ends up fingering her like ? BUT THAT WASN'T RUSHED?

I've heard the misunderstanding - i don't think it was JUST the misunderstanding. Again Shinobu went soft on her and neglected her for a couple chapters. Plus the Fuckboi found Sakura's pen gift so it's not like he was some irrelevant character either

What other reason?
I do blame the readers cause like I really don't understand how anyone picks up this manga from the beginning reads 5-10 chapters even and go "this is gonna be a really good normal RomCom"
Thats like me watching Goblin Slayer the first episode then I continue to watch and I'm like "eh why is there so much goblin rape in this series. I thought it was gonna be a normal fantasy series what is this garbage" no
Because it makes ever single moment between shinobu and Sakura ilrelivent after the fact then there is the fact you have to turn off both characters brains to make it work as well as bring sakura's character so far down it begs belief that she ever loved shinobu in the first place it was poorly paced instead of showing us Sakura slowly moving away from shionbu because he isn't taking care in their relationship it was portrayed as a misunderstanding that caused her to immediately run into another guys dick fuck him all night breakup over text move in with the guy and change agency's overnight over nothing when she herself did far worse ironically with no repercussions at all it was generic boring and forced plot convince.

On top of all that you can not have a netorare and a romance in the traditional sense a romance is two characters who start alone and end together and netorare is two characters who start together and one is stolen they are fundamentally different stories and to make it work would require a truly skilled writer and it has to be done in a certain way or you get this!
 
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