GraPara! - Vol. 14 Ch. 135 - Sex Scenes

[diphuc1]

Some comments on Airi's latest post on X.

"I hope that every relationship you write about is like the ones you're a trashy writer. I also pray that your parents cheat on you."

"The only question I have is, what did Shinobu gain after losing Sakura? Since she lost something important to her, surely she must have gained something good, right? So,
What did she gain from that? Witnessing Fumi being raped right in front of her eyes? Airi is seriously insane."

"You and your character are both ugly and hopelessly worthless."


"Teacher, why? You've ruined the character that fans loved the most. Fumi was the best female character in this work, but now she's a mess. Does Shinobu not deserve to be happy? Are you going to make Sakura and Yuma, who cheated on you, happy? It's so unfair!!!!"

"With such a shallow plot development, is a sensible ending even possible? Does Fumi, a gentle woman with no sexual experience who is deeply in love with Shinobu, completely lack the rationality to think things through like a normal person?"

"Airi was nothing more than a foolish writer who only wanted to satisfy her own fetish, and that's a very sad thing."

"Teacher, I was expecting a decent ending. I thought it would be a story where Aya and Shinobu get together properly, and Sakura has to accept the consequences of her choices. But in reality, it's not a romantic comedy or anything, just a simple NTR fantasy. It was just a waste of the readers' time."

Can't blame them with this chapter ending cliffhanger, should've just shown the ShiKura cliffhanger reunion moment instead of spending pages on the Ryusei chat leading to a GAW DAM PEN.

 

[hugorito420]

Can't blame them with this chapter ending cliffhanger, should've just shown the ShiKura cliffhanger reunion moment instead of spending pages on the Ryusei chat leading to a GAW DAM PEN.

I don't support that kind of harassment but she asked for it for what she did in this chapter.

 

[Alsatia]

Atleast he got that bro..

Atleast he got that.

They may find "better" partners. But they can't claim to be their firsts.

 

[Apollo_Ibis]

They just have to pay the price of letting him pop their cherries 😏
He's 2 for 2 in this regard.

In all seriousness though, depending on how it's resolved Fumi will likely stay by his side. She wants to support him. She's doing all this because she "only want you to look at me" and she can't have that if he still thinks of Sakura. It's just worrying how far she's willing to go to achieve this while losing rational.

I really don’t understand why she thinks this would make him stay with her.

 

[SS-2010]

Some comments on Airi's latest post on X.

"I hope that every relationship you write about is like the ones you're a trashy writer. I also pray that your parents cheat on you."

"The only question I have is, what did Shinobu gain after losing Sakura? Since she lost something important to her, surely she must have gained something good, right? So,
What did she gain from that? Witnessing Fumi being raped right in front of her eyes? Airi is seriously insane."

"You and your character are both ugly and hopelessly worthless."


"Teacher, why? You've ruined the character that fans loved the most. Fumi was the best female character in this work, but now she's a mess. Does Shinobu not deserve to be happy? Are you going to make Sakura and Yuma, who cheated on you, happy? It's so unfair!!!!"

"With such a shallow plot development, is a sensible ending even possible? Does Fumi, a gentle woman with no sexual experience who is deeply in love with Shinobu, completely lack the rationality to think things through like a normal person?"

"Airi was nothing more than a foolish writer who only wanted to satisfy her own fetish, and that's a very sad thing."

"Teacher, I was expecting a decent ending. I thought it would be a story where Aya and Shinobu get together properly, and Sakura has to accept the consequences of her choices. But in reality, it's not a romantic comedy or anything, just a simple NTR fantasy. It was just a waste of the readers' time."

Sad for her that she cannot delete or order someone to delete these comments in X (twitter) like she can do with Japanese comments on MegaPoke. MagaPoke deleted and hid over hundred comments yesterday. Airi Katsura (sensei) can't lie to herself when she's on in X (twitter). LOL

 

[hugorito420]

Sad for her that she cannot delete or order someone to delete these comments in X (twitter) like she can do with Japanese comments on MegaPoke. MagaPoke deleted and hid over hundred comments yesterday. Airi Katsura (sensei) can't lie to herself when she's on in X (twitter). LOL

In her other post before that has some hate comments too.

 

[SS-2010]

I will keep this is in mind, because it makes sense. Sliver of hope is that GraPara! is still a work between KA and the artist and that's enough for me to have a bit of cope/hope for the next 2 weeks of waiting.

Me too! I hope nothing from Airi Katsura (sensei) but I still have my hope on Keishi Nishikida sensei, the artist.

 

[Apollo_Ibis]

This is how shinobus ending most likely plays out: they wrap up filming with the scene, movie becomes another hit, shinobu and fumi separate because she’s getting an offer for a much bigger role, he gets left behind because he thinks he’s just holding her back (again). Last page is him finding the next girl he wants to make „shine“.

And this is going to be a repeating cycle: he finds a talented girl, makes her shine, she moves on and he’s going to look for the next. never being truly happy because he knows things will always end the same way: him looking for the next diamond in the rough.

 

[hugorito420]

In her other post before that has some hate comments too.

And i took the most light ones.

 

[Alsatia]

I really don’t understand why she thinks this would make him stay with her.

It's a common trope we see in these kind of stories. Even in some manwhas and other stuff. People will go far to be with the ones they love.

Like that one oujo girl from "Blasting, GO!" or something like that. She sleeps with a douche to plot a means of getting the MC for herself.

 

[CraneBrane]

Me too! I hope nothing from Airi Katsura (sensei) but I still have my hope on Keishi Nishikida sensei, the artist.

How much responsibility does an artist have in the direction of a manga? Could the artist have stopped this nonsense? If he could have, then screw him too

 

[hugorito420]

It's a common trope we see in these kind of stories. Even in some manwhas and other stuff. People will go far to be with the ones they love.

Like that one oujo girl from "Blasting, GO!" or something like that. She sleeps with a douche to plot a means of getting the MC for herself.

It is very common trope in this kind of story.

 

[diphuc1]

How much responsibility does an artist have in the direction of a manga? Could the artist have stopped this nonsense? If he could have, then screw him too

The artist is a KA fan from what I've heard so they probably trusted in KA having a grander vision when they were told about the "plan". Right now it's hard for me to believe KA really had a further reaching visions but atp I'll just reserve judgment til 136.

 

[hugorito420]

How much responsibility does an artist have in the direction of a manga? Could the artist have stopped this nonsense? If he could have, then screw him too

I think Airi decision has more weight than the artirts.So probably she couldn't do too much.

 

[whorainzone]

It's a common trope we see in these kind of stories. Even in some manwhas and other stuff. People will go far to be with the ones they love.

Like that one oujo girl from "Blasting, GO!" or something like that. She sleeps with a douche to plot a means of getting the MC for herself.

you mean brawling go! right? and if yes wasnt it that the douche possessed mc and to bring him back they all fucked him

 

[Alsatia]

you mean brawling go! right? and if yes wasnt it that the douche possessed mc and to bring him back they all fucked him

That's it. I couldn't fully remember the name! I never finished the story. I stopped sometime after that blonde oujo was sleeping with the douche. She only did it because he asked for it for his cooperation. He wanted the FMC too.

It's not that I hated it, I just never got back to it. But the two were plotting.

But that's my point when I say tropes like these are expected. Some people will go to extremes to be with the ones they love. Hell even the first two female leads from Illicit love were like this for the MC after they fucked things up.

 

[whorainzone]

That's it. I couldn't fully remember the name! I never finished the story. I stopped sometime after that blonde oujo was sleeping with the douche. She only did it because he asked for it for his cooperation. He wanted the FMC too.

It's not that I hated it, I just never got back to it. But the two were plotting.

But that's my point when I say tropes like these are expected. Some people will go to extremes to be with the ones they love. Hell even the first two female leads from Illicit love were like this for the MC after they fucked things up.

Yeah i barely remember it aswell. But iirc the fmc never fucked someone else except mc. So yeah your point is right tho

 

[Apollo_Ibis]

„the whole night, while I was searching for her, she…“

„The whole night I spent rewriting the storyboard for her, only for her…“

 

[Edway89]

Some comments on Airi's latest post on X.

"I hope that every relationship you write about is like the ones you're a trashy writer. I also pray that your parents cheat on you."

"The only question I have is, what did Shinobu gain after losing Sakura? Since she lost something important to her, surely she must have gained something good, right? So,
What did she gain from that? Witnessing Fumi being raped right in front of her eyes? Airi is seriously insane."

"You and your character are both ugly and hopelessly worthless."


"Teacher, why? You've ruined the character that fans loved the most. Fumi was the best female character in this work, but now she's a mess. Does Shinobu not deserve to be happy? Are you going to make Sakura and Yuma, who cheated on you, happy? It's so unfair!!!!"

"With such a shallow plot development, is a sensible ending even possible? Does Fumi, a gentle woman with no sexual experience who is deeply in love with Shinobu, completely lack the rationality to think things through like a normal person?"

"Airi was nothing more than a foolish writer who only wanted to satisfy her own fetish, and that's a very sad thing."

"Teacher, I was expecting a decent ending. I thought it would be a story where Aya and Shinobu get together properly, and Sakura has to accept the consequences of her choices. But in reality, it's not a romantic comedy or anything, just a simple NTR fantasy. It was just a waste of the readers' time."

This is so pathetic. You know can just block, right? Better yet she can restrict and entire region from commenting on her account.

 

[diphuc1]

My cop out prediction for ShiFumi survival rate: 50/50