GraPara! - Vol. 14 Ch. 135 - Sex Scenes

[Alsatia]

Pool party, he did the writing for it

Oh he did??? I had no idea. Wasn't the artist the same one that did Landlord's daughter?

I had a feeling it ended too quick but then again there isn't much to work with in a setting like that I think.

 

[Apollo_Ibis]

Oh he did??? I had no idea. Wasn't the artist the same one that did Landlord's daughter?

I had a feeling it ended too quick but then again there isn't much to work with in a setting like that I think.

According to him it was supposed to be 60-70 chapters long but it got cut short. Maybe he Wanted to bring in some ntr stuff but the artist wanted none of that.

 

[hugorito420]

I don't see it either, it's not as simple as saying "oh all she did is put on an act for the scene". There was a month time skip, they had plenty of time to talk, she pretended to agree with Shinobu's idea the whole time only to off-script it at the last minute.

No further need to believe in good outcomes, just take it as we see it when 136 drops.

I still think it was a last desparete attempt to make Shinobu see her.She probably made made to be like "hey,i can do that too and i want you to only see mee".

She was showed as Shinobu who would do anything to Shinobu even if is a stupid thing like the scammer chapters.This type of stupid logic exists in many manga/manwhas stories and here i think we can apply that possibility too.

I think that logic of one mouth talk has also to be applied with Fuckboi and Sakura because they didn't solve their problem too.

In this story,one thing we doesn't have is proper communication,if we had this Shinobu and Sakura would never break up,in the story we had misunderstanding after misunderstanding and they had a bunch of time to do that.If we had communication Shinobu and Fumi could solve their problem and if we had a proper communication Sakura and Fuckboi also had to their problem.

In my opinion that one mouth to talk in REAL LIFE makes sense but in this manga communication was almost zero and in this case was nothing different from what we have seen before in the story.They only talked afterbsome big mess happen and that will be the case again here.

 

[Dirigibull]

That's my cope as well if Yuma stays with Sakura, imagine if another fuckboi comes along and Yuma finds himself in the same situation that Shinobu was in and a grand misunderstanding happen that leads to fuckboi 2.0 taking Sakura from Yuma.

Still advocating for scumbag Shinobu if this happens.

 

[Alsatia]

According to him it was supposed to be 60-70 chapters long but it got cut short. Maybe he Wanted to bring in some ntr stuff but the artist wanted none of that.

Yea that's fair. Given the few baits, all the other girls were fucking everyone except for the FMC.. well save for the oral play she did but that was it.

He should just stick with the artist for the Soeun and all. But he probably went to another artist Because they were busy with Soeun lol

 

[jonasadan]

I still think it was a last desparete attempt to make Shinobu see her.She probably made made to be like "hey,i can do that too and i want you to only see mee".

She was showed as Shinobu who would do anything to Shinobu even if is a stupid thing like the scammer chapters.This type of stupid logic exists in many manga/manwhas stories and here i think we can apply that possibility too.

I think that logic of one mouth talk has also to be applied with Fuckboi and Sakura because they didn't solve their problem too.

In this story,one thing we doesn't have is proper communication,if we had this Shinobu and Sakura would never break up,in the story we had misunderstanding after misunderstanding and they had a bunch of time to do that.If we had communication Shinobu and Fumi could solve their problem and if we had a proper communication Sakura and Fuckboi also had to their problem.

In my opinion that one mouth to talk in REAL LIFE makes sense but in this manga communication was almost zero and in this case was nothing different from what we have seen before in the story.They only talked afterbsome big mess happen and that will be the case again here.

That one-month timeskip really messes up the narrative; if they hadn't done it, Fumi's actions would have been understood as impulsive, but now it's a premeditated act.

 

[SS-2010]

Fumi did everything she could to make him look at her, idk what she's thinking here because as always we didn't get to see her thoughts. Maybe it is her last desperate attempt to finally get him to look only at her. But I don't believe in a good outcome anymore.

I don't see it either, it's not as simple as saying "oh all she did is put on an act for the scene". There was a month time skip, they had plenty of time to talk, she pretended to agree with Shinobu's idea the whole time only to off-script it at the last minute.

I still think it was a last desparete attempt to make Shinobu see her.She probably made made to be like "hey,i can do that too and i want you to only see mee".

That one-month timeskip really messes up the narrative; if they hadn't done it, Fumi's actions would have been understood as impulsive, but now it's a premeditated act.

Yea there wasn't much build up save for the TWO moments of insecurities we see from Fumi. Being the Sakura comment and that damned PEN-KUN!!! 💢💢💢💢

Conversely, I view this as a self-sacrifice from Fumi to push Shinobu back to Sakura. It isn’t an act of spite or a bid for attention. Her true nature is doing anything for Shinobu she loves. She is sacrificing her own happiness so Shinobu can truly let go by believing she no longer loves him (even though it is merely a performance and she actually still loves him). Fumi is still Fumi who is an angel. So sad why harem ending won't happen.

 

[Apollo_Ibis]

It wouldn't have been so difficult to end the story with both couples staying together. I would've been fine with that. But no here we are now.

 

[Alsatia]

That one-month timeskip really messes up the narrative; if they hadn't done it, Fumi's actions would have been understood as impulsive, but now it's a premeditated act.

Yea there wasn't much build up save for the TWO moments of insecurities we see from Fumi. Being the Sakura comment and that damned PEN-KUN!!! 💢💢💢💢

It really made this just come out of nowhere just for cliffhanger/shock value

 

[Absent666]

Still advocating for scumbag Shinobu if this happens.

Ooohhhh boy, don't!

Cuckatsura really thinks only ikemen and alpha chads can get their way with being scumbags, but riajuus, normies and beta losers like Shinobu be fucking damned and ready for getting #MeToo'd if they ever dared to do so.

A gentle reminder women reslly looks and charisma (and in the worst case, money) can help you get your way with being a piece of melting molten turd.

 

[hugorito420]

That one-month timeskip really messes up the narrative; if they hadn't done it, Fumi's actions would have been understood as impulsive, but now it's a premeditated act.

I didn't say that was impulsive,i said it was a desperate last attempt to make Shinobu only see her.She probably had planned to do that was a last attempt to make Shinobu see her in the same way as Sakura.

 

[Apollo_Ibis]

I didn't say that was impulsive,i said it was a desperate last attempt to make Shinobu only see her.She probably had planned to do that was a last attempt to make Shinobu see her in the same way as Sakura.

But she isn't Sakura. She's Fumi and she is so much better than Sakura. Or was. Until she decided to go ballistic.

 

[Alsatia]

But she isn't Sakura. She's Fumi and she is so much better than Sakura. Or was. Until she decided to go ballistic.

We'll have to wait for 136 for the result but what she did was indeed reckless. I can't even deny that as a Fumi fan.

 

[hugorito420]

Yea there wasn't much build up save for the TWO moments of insecurities we see from Fumi. Being the Sakura comment and that damned PEN-KUN!!! 💢💢💢💢

It really made this just come out of nowhere just for cliffhanger/shock value

The author does not even done a decent job make us understand what happended.

Every time i remember the reason to Fumi pull the trigger is a FUCKING PEN,i see how Airi is hell of a bad writer.

 

[Apollo_Ibis]

We'll have to wait for 136 for the result but what she did was indeed reckless. I can't even deny that as a Fumi fan.

So better abandon the Fumi train and join the doomed ending train I even have cookies.

 

[Absent666]

So better abandon the Fumi train and join the doomed ending train I even have cookies.

After watching Brand New day (in 4dx)... i'm ready for more sad and bitter ends.

 

[Alsatia]

The author does not even done a decent job make us understand what happended.

Every time i remember the reason to Fumi pull the trigger is a FUCKING PEN,i see how Airi is hell of a bad writer.

It's funny when the pen is being memed when it comes to Fumi's actions lol

So better abandon the Fumi train and join the doomed ending train I even have cookies.

Yea but the Fumi train as so much cope weed though. I'm high as hell. Cope cookies and brownies.

 

[hugorito420]

But she isn't Sakura. She's Fumi and she is so much better than Sakura. Or was. Until she decided to go ballistic.

I have to remember that Airi writing was never coherent since the start so here is not a suprise to make such stupid action here.

And Fumi was stupid sometimes too,i think you are forgeting about her almost being raped by a scammer because she wanted to get founds for Shinobu's project.

You forget that she took of her clothes off to slepp next to Shinobu when he was drunk.

Yes,i think she is better but she is not flawless like people point.

 

[Apollo_Ibis]

It's funny when the pen is being memed when it comes to Fumi's actions lol

Yea but the Fumi train as so much cope weed though. I'm high as hell. Cope cookies and brownies.

Too much weed isn't healthy. The train is heading for a cliff anyway

 

[Alsatia]

I have to remember that Airi writing was never coherent since the start so here is not a suprise to make such stupid action here.

And Fumi was stupid sometimes too,i think you are forgeting about her almost being raped by a scammer because she wanted to get founds for Shinobu's project.

You forget that she took of her clothes off to slepp next to Shinobu when he was drunk.

Yes,i think she is better but she is not flawless like people point.

To be fair in her defense, she got drugged with an aphrodisiac when that scammer offered her a drink.