GraPara! - Vol. 14 Ch. 136 - Grapara!

[hugorito420]

Reading the comments, I get the feeling that the only ones who are outraged are us foreigners.

The artist didn't suffer hate even if 129 was dropped.It's was all in Airi's social media.

 

[Alsatia]

Shinobu is shooting close-ups of the action; he's not playing around with camera angles... it's very difficult to simulate sex under those conditions.

It is not. Lighting and angles are important. Even then he's just capturing her face mostly. Making her "shine".

It's to give the illusion of sex without the sex. Like one of those "I can't believe it's not sex!" scenes. What we see Sakura doing is all part of the script. Granted there is the chance she's still feeling good being touched given past scenes.

But the hand holding is improv which made her smile. That's why she's smiling. It's not an actual porno. This could change in a doujin spin off, but it's not happening here.

 

[hugorito420]

And more important: He knows his audience, his goal is to keep on them looking forward next chapters, not to please haters.

He knows how to make a big impact in the story when it is needed.

 

[juacox300]

I thought something sexier and more chaotic would happen, but it turned out to be a more boring NTR story than I expected. The final panel is pretty cliché for NTR stories.

 

[Kuroageha]

Reading the comments, I get the feeling that the only ones who are outraged are us foreigners.

No, the JP readers already checked out and left the room. They're not even celebrating the ending also the platform for comments it's the app not X.

 

[NeverAnother]

WOW! Holy FUCK the head from this one went soaring into the 100 mile garbage pit after the axe came down, what the fuck?! Throw a match down too

 

[Wyrm666]

Anyway, it's ass.
It's usual KA, writing whatever to move from one scene to the other.
So Shinobu filmed a scene with Fumi, and never talked to her, ever. Fumi didn't even "I did it for you and it worked!" No. "I didn't want to burden her." "It was awkward."
Then with Sakura, it's as if the film production started with the sex scene. They didn't talk, didn't plan, didn't spoke about the past and where they both are. Not that the full missing convos would be any good or fit in a chapter.
But the last scene it's as if Shinobu didn't talk to her before, didn't filmed her until that sex scene. The cherry on the top is the tears in his face. So gooners can be happy that they have their crying cuck trope and mentally healthy people can "aaaww, he finally is working with his muse."
Again, it was ass. Faux deep, faux emotional ass. And, of course. With his hand on the frame: "oh, we have to reshoot!"

 

[jonasadan]

I thought something sexier and more chaotic would happen, but it turned out to be a more boring NTR story than I expected. The final panel is pretty cliché for NTR stories.

Every time I see that, it gets more absurd hahahahaha

 

[hugorito420]

I thought something sexier and more chaotic would happen, but it turned out to be a more boring NTR story than I expected. The final panel is pretty cliché for NTR stories.

They holding hands was probably the Airi's way to make this romantic.Hella weird but is her logic.

 

[Wyrm666]

Rag is a soap opera not a romcom. Readers know of this, haters still think it's a failed romcom.

RAG is Programing

WHILE money DO
MC shouts;
FMC makes him jealous;
2FMC tries to get MC;
MC grabs a boob:
MC remembers FMC;
MC cries;
FMC decides no;
MC tries;
LOOP;

 

[hugorito420]

RAG is Programing

WHILE money DO
MC shouts;
FMC makes him jealous;
2FMC tries to get MC;
MC grabs a boob:
MC remembers FMC;
MC cries;
FMC decides no;
MC tries;
LOOP;

Right now is this:

Mc trying to improve;
2FMC harassing him;
FMC being indecisive;
The ex looking at him;
LOOP;

 

[Gonli]

This is it ?
Is this some kind of a joke ?
What is that lame ass ending with no resolution ?
I'm baffled by how trash all of this became since the infamous cuck chapter.
Wow.

 

[spitfiremase]

gooners can be happy that they have their crying cuck trope and mentally healthy people can "aaaww, he finally is working with his muse."

Yeah. Obviously it's framed in the tropes of the genre, but this is what I read it as. It's leaning in to cuck shit, while like, obviously the follow up to this is they get back together and do directing and modeling as a team again. Which is relatively romantic in theory, but it's drenched in NTR tropes, so the cuck lovers get to have fun more than romance enjoyers.

 

[Wyrm666]

This is it ?
Is this some kind of a joke ?
What is that lame ass ending with no resolution ?
I'm baffled by how trash all of this became since the infamous cuck chapter.
Wow.

But... don't you play games on your phone?

 

[b-no]

Holy… my expectations were already low but I didn’t know it can get lower.

As usual, FMC got out scot-free. That’s what this lobotomized author loves.

 

[diphuc1]

They holding hands was probably the Airi's way to make this romantic.Hella weird but is her logic.

I hate that I kind of see it, it's tasteless in the end though, I prefered the 135 flashback with them walking side by side all smiles.

Yeah. Obviously it's framed in the tropes of the genre, but this is what I read it as. It's leaning in to cuck shit, while like, obviously the follow up to this is they get back together and do directing and modeling as a team again. Which is relatively romantic in theory, but it's drenched in NTR tropes, so the cuck lovers get to have fun more than romance enjoyers.

I'm not pinning hopes on some bonus chapter being an epilogue+ of sorts but it's strange how we don't even get a real heart to heart conversation between the MC's, the truth was revealed through Fumi and then they just end up working together again.

 

[Rafalga]

It is not. Lighting and angles are important. Even then he's just capturing her face mostly. Making her "shine".

It's to give the illusion of sex without the sex. Like one of those "I can't believe it's not sex!" scenes. What we see Sakura doing is all part of the script. Granted there is the chance she's still feeling good being touched given past scenes.

But the hand holding is improv which made her smile. That's why she's smiling. It's not an actual porno. This could change in a doujin spin off, but it's not happening here.

According to these people Sydney Sweeney is getting railed like 5 times a week on set for every movie she appears in.

 

[Wyrm666]

I'm not pinning hopes on some bonus chapter being an epilogue+ of sorts but it's strange how we don't even get a real heart to heart conversation between the MC's, the truth was revealed through Fumi and then they just end up working together.

It's not strange at all. KA doesn't do real humans talking to each other.

 

[Alsatia]

According to these people Sydney Sweeney is getting railed like 5 times a week on every movie she appears in.

"What do you mean actors can act out sex scenes? It has to be real sex scenes!" Ahh people (I still love you guys)

 

[Wyrm666]

"What do you mean actors can act out sex scenes? It has to be real sex scenes!" Ahh people (I still love you guys)

OTOH, what exactly is that black box censoring? A prosthesis?