Shinmai Shimai no Futari Gohan - Vol. 11 Ch. 70 - T-Bone Steak

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Good job with the typesetting, I would just look into how to make characters smoother as these feel a bit grainy! Also, as someone pointed out, about half the sentences make little sense, are hard to follow and are grammatically wrong. You need a proofreader!
 
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Its back!
Thanks for picking it up and for your work!
And yeah as others have said, the only thing that needs some work is the grammar
 
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It's unfortunate that the yuri in this manga is dead in the water. At least, this manga's still being scanlated.
 

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