I know you may not really mean it since you’re not fluent in English, but you sounded very pretentious in the way you worded your sentences (example: “be better” don’t say that, that’s a command, nobody enjoys to be boss around).I’m not trying to criticize you but I recommend you to learn how to...
Imagine how powerful Owen would be. Aoi was already godlike to many people even the royalties, and Owen was supposed to be even more powerful than her.
If you see bigoted comments, just report them. There’s no need to engage.
If you feel you have to call them out no matter what, then use rational words, I don’t think mods are going to have a problem with that.
On one hand, I can understand why some people would get angry, it may feel like an insult, like they are telling you your tls are not good enough, especially if yours is already decent enough. On the other hand, I do sometime wish more people get into translating a same series, as some groups...
Your English has improved, I’m glad!
There are still some errors, and dialogue flows have room to improve, but it’s much better than the previous chapters.