I'm translating the prequel at the moment. I'm not sure what you mean by "what was Bambi." I think C answered that when Tanahashi asked, and that's probably the best answer we're gonna get.
You're welcome :) I'm a translator first and a scanlator very much second, so this whole thing has been a learning experience. I'm excited now that we're so close to the end!
I loved this one :) Nothing currently out excites me as much.
I guess finding a new project can be exciting, too.
I'm so happy that you and others could enjoy Shijuukara with me :)
I agree and I think some of the real-world manga problems that we see through Shinobu affected this manga, in the end. That is, Shijuukara got the ax at the production company for whatever reason, and Sakai Eri was left scrambling to finish.
I appreciate that we got a capstone happy ending...
I'm happy that he seems to understand her already. I think it's healthy for them to have separate work lives while supporting each other in their home lives, but I was a little bummed that they couldn't manage the crazy togetherness of living in each other's pockets for a little longer, since...
I have good news and bad news: the manga ends at chapter 56. I would have liked it to continue, but alas. :(
Good news: the ending looks happy. I am cleaning raws and then the translating and typsetting can begin. I hope to have the final chapter up over the weekend, or early next week at the...
Holy comma splices Batman. https://www.grammarly.com/blog/comma-splice/
I agree with dankEnglish on most things, and I think reading your work aloud might help you to write it with more natural pacing.
Good on you for putting your work out there!
One other thing: use "asked" and "said" for...
I was honestly stunned at this one, too, but the more I think about it the more I think it fits. Remember when Yohei collapsed, spent all that time in the hospital, and there was the five-year time skip before Shinobu and Chiaki saw each other again? I see echoes of that here.
Touko and Yohei...
I agreed with you about Seira until she actually assaulted him. I don't think that's something they can recover from, sadly. I hope they can try to be friends. The drama showed them that way.
Hi, I'm the scanlator! Volume 4 is translated, so I'll be trying to do a chapter every week or two. I have all the raws, so I hope to keep going and finish it. Maybe even do the prequel, too. :)
Scanlator here :) Yohei hasn't made an appearance in Volume 16 yet, but there's still one more chapter I'm waiting on in Japanese. I highly doubt the story's done with him yet.