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I still feel bad for the girl Camilla ignored in ch 17

THANK YOU! as much as I appreciate newer stuff being translated, I really wish more translators would go back through older stuff and “finish” it,

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you’re such a douche, no one wants you here including yourself if you‘re actually telling the truth, just screw off. and you are anything but multifaceted, you are saying something is automatically trash if it is a certain genre/s that is as single note as you could possibly get.

I guess all the US soldiers deployed on the island (pg 35) just died then.

Thank you for the great work as always, definitely less mistakes this time. And a great improvement especially in past vs present tense. pg 2, “just how did you” instead of “just how do you” as it’s past tense since they already found Clice. pg 6, “in the Pacific“ instead of “on the Pacific”...

pg 14, yes if it’s more informal thats fine. I’m happy to help.

Thanks again, there’s definitely less mistakes this time pg 2, “through city hall“ would imply the president is moving in the building, as he’s in a car “past city hall“ as in driving past, makes more sense. pg 6, “safe travels” is generally what’s said instead of “safe travel” pg 8, “better...

Actually I think she’s a bladderwort many species are known for colourful showy flowers and it would complete the typical quartet of carnivorous plants (there are a few other groups but their less talked about).

pg 8, in retrospect I over complicated it, just switching the words “now” and “safe” around (so it reads “are now safe” will make it flow better. the thing with page 18, is more of a quirk of English then anything else. Yes it’s a singular place but because headquarters ends with an s making...

Hi, sorry for the late reply. first let me reiterate these are minor mistakes and it’s still completely understandable. Most mistakes seem to be in regards to past vs present tense, missing a’s, missing or inappropriate s’s, and other singular missing words. starting pg 8, this is an easy...

Thanks, theres a few places where the grammars off or words in sentences are in a weird order, it could do with a second proof read next time. Nothing major though definitely understandable

I was just thinking I wanted more of this the other day, thanks

Thanks for translating, this could have done with one or two more proof reads though. There’s missing words in a few places, incorrect past vs present tense (can’t vs couldn’t) and other issues like using “are you“ instead of “you are”. don't get me wrong it’s great your doing this but just...