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    Mr. Clice - Vol. 4 Ch. 17 - Wishing upon the Southern Star

    I guess all the US soldiers deployed on the island (pg 35) just died then.
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    Mr. Clice - Vol. 4 Ch. 17 - Wishing upon the Southern Star

    Thank you for the great work as always, definitely less mistakes this time. And a great improvement especially in past vs present tense. pg 2, “just how did you” instead of “just how do you” as it’s past tense since they already found Clice. pg 6, “in the Pacific“ instead of “on the Pacific”...
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    Mr. Clice - Vol. 4 Ch. 16 - Showdown in Beijing; The Sleepless Ancient Capital

    pg 14, yes if it’s more informal thats fine. I’m happy to help.
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    Mr. Clice - Vol. 4 Ch. 16 - Showdown in Beijing; The Sleepless Ancient Capital

    Thanks again, there’s definitely less mistakes this time pg 2, “through city hall“ would imply the president is moving in the building, as he’s in a car “past city hall“ as in driving past, makes more sense. pg 6, “safe travels” is generally what’s said instead of “safe travel” pg 8, “better...
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    Cannibal Trap - Oneshot

    Actually I think she’s a bladderwort many species are known for colourful showy flowers and it would complete the typical quartet of carnivorous plants (there are a few other groups but their less talked about).
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    Mr. Clice - Vol. 4 Ch. 15 - Mega City Panic

    pg 8, in retrospect I over complicated it, just switching the words “now” and “safe” around (so it reads “are now safe” will make it flow better. the thing with page 18, is more of a quirk of English then anything else. Yes it’s a singular place but because headquarters ends with an s making...
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    Mr. Clice - Vol. 4 Ch. 15 - Mega City Panic

    Hi, sorry for the late reply. first let me reiterate these are minor mistakes and it’s still completely understandable. Most mistakes seem to be in regards to past vs present tense, missing a’s, missing or inappropriate s’s, and other singular missing words. starting pg 8, this is an easy...
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    Mr. Clice - Vol. 4 Ch. 15 - Mega City Panic

    Thanks, theres a few places where the grammars off or words in sentences are in a weird order, it could do with a second proof read next time. Nothing major though definitely understandable
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    Don't Call Me a Naked Hero in Another World - Vol. 2 Ch. 6 - The Naked Hero's First Quest

    I was just thinking I wanted more of this the other day, thanks
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    Tsuki ga Kirei Desu ne - Ch. 37

    Thanks for translating, this could have done with one or two more proof reads though. There’s missing words in a few places, incorrect past vs present tense (can’t vs couldn’t) and other issues like using “are you“ instead of “you are”. don't get me wrong it’s great your doing this but just...
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    The Wolf in Love and Mille-Feuille - Vol. 2 Ch. 6 - Märchen 6: Cruel Sirius

    @lookingformywife I think it was a premonition/foresight
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    Nomura Nao to Kyougoku Hina wa - Oneshot

    @ARealCoolGuy a lot of that kind of came out of no where I was just describing what I saw I never took a stance and whether it should have had it or not, I for one generally enjoy a seeing little romance In most things (there’s definitely completely shoe horned in and plain awful romance in many...
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    Nomura Nao to Kyougoku Hina wa - Oneshot

    @_thestranger_ I get where your coming from but I think there’s 3 things in particular that show there’s romantic interest, firstly on page 17 she gets embarrassed and/or nervous when she notices how pretty kyougoku is I mean that’s not how you react towards someone who’s purely friend or family...
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    Mr. Clice - Vol. 2 Ch. 8 - Clice and the Nine Detectives

    Hey just thought I would say I really appreciate you guys translating this even though the chapters are long and not many people read it, keep up the good work
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    Haiko Dolls - Vol. 2 Ch. 26

    THANKS for translating I’m so glad I can take something off the unfinished series I liked list
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