I was curious about the "problematic character design" line so I checked the raw.
The Japanese is 「そして相変わらずの目のやり場に困るキャラデザ」 which translate to something like "And the same character design, I don't know where to look".
DeepL straight up translate it to "And the same eye-catching character design."
@DanyRaid While the edit is better, a translator should stick to translating, it is not their role to try to improve the work.
I do appreciate the effort though, I'd recommend putting it at the end of the chapter as bonus.
Small typo on page 11, the coma should be outside the quotes: "'experiences from alternate timelines with Sou Satou,'" => "'experiences from alternate timelines with Sou Satou',"
As always, thank you for your work @BB-62 :hearts:
Yeah, I checked the raw and that's it. The way it's phrased in the TL led me to believe that while this wasn't the reason for her desire for revenge, that it still happened.
Then again, it might also just be me being stupid and not reading well... Anyway thank you.