I see what you did there :lul:
But yeah. I've seen sudden endings. This one is likely the most "THE. END. FULL STOP." Of em all.
She literally gets almost offscreened slimed by a faceless goober.
Brutal. But I guess when you operate like her, you make lots of faceless enemies who will slime...
Brother has fully gone to the Dark Side with how he had been operating and treating these gals.
Its a fair point and Ive done that for plenty of stuff. The problem in my case is that Lynn Okamoto can actually write engaging stuff... mostly. He for sure cant seem to write a good ending.
So here...
. . .
[*radio crackle*]
Uhhhhhhhh... @Lightbrand you seein' the same shit Im seeing here, over.
Yeah, confirmed it looks like he FILLED a rocket engine with bodies, thats an affirm on filled with fuckin bodies, over.
If you cant fuck beat them, join them?
Also I was so sure that was about to be the suggest that he had to mate with the jealous god. Had to check the tags on this real quick lol
Oh good, we are back! I wonder what bomb the author is going to dro-
The author:
... I mean untrustworthy narrator, but she. DID. WHAT?
Holy moly this ride don't quit does it lol
Is that a rock and stone I hear?
ROCK. AND. STONE!
BUt no seriously, how long till we get our otherworld M16/M4 at this point? We just hired dwarfs... We have paratroopers and artillery... we just need reliable battle rifles for our troops lol.
Me at the start of the chapter: How nice! I did state I was coming around on her, only thinking of her as an unlikeable jackass...
Me at the end if the chapter:
Shes gunna make me regret this isnt she?
I did. With the number of confused reaccs you got, its safe to say we all did. I'm pointing out that expectation of yours is like sitting down on a toilet with your pants down and being surprised when a turd pops out of your ass.
Yes, sitting on a toilet doesn't mean shitting... but you...