I think I much prefer it when the relationship with the old team isn't shot on either side. Can't say it's original or totally refreshing, but definitely on the better side of how to handle it.
I’m already not a fan of splitting chapters like this, but it’s worse when it’s the first chapter
Please god, just let us read it and see if we want to continue BEFORE slicing it into eight pieces
Seems to be a generic "He gives orders and strategizes" which seems on paper useless until needed.
They're going to all regret it in like three chapters.
I always can't help but fucking think about why all these slavery stories don't just have the protag free their slaves. It's always "Ah I want to stay your slave because you treated me nicely and it shows I want your dick" versus "You freed me so I'm going to stand by your side."
This at least...
I think I need to sue the author for damages due to the fucking whiplash from "My family abandoned me" to "Going to school due to my family" within two chapters, with zero signs that the family cares at all anymore. What the actual hell is this writing?