Good job on the translation itself, very readable, no glaring grammatical errors or awkward sentences. As for cleaning, redrawing, typesetting, font selection etc. that's all stuff that can be learned if you're interested. The scanlations section of the forums here should have quite a few...
A reminder for those who may not want a low quality snipe to clutter up their feed. You can click on the name of the uploader and then block them to prevent their releases from appearing for you.
this is a fairly selfish desire but I hope you keep up with this series even though someone just dumped the rest of the manga, the quality of your work is so much better