Am I the only one who feels so... Lost? Confused? I dont have a right word for this.
It had a great setting, dont get me wrong. I just feel like the execution was terrible. No comments on art or anything since it delivers what needs to be delivered, but Im just... really confused with the...
@Heimdal in the last page of this chapter, you can see the callback to the first few chapters where she said she could see nameplates. Its not a visual clarity thing by the artist, I think its a skill the other girl has. Hence the question about the loophole
Hi OrangeScans team!
Just abit of feedback regarding the translation quality - I honestly feel it'll be great to find someone to help edit your translation. Your TL is fine, but you need to have someone whose actually fluent in EN.
Personal advice from a former editor; don't worry about being...