That interaction, just by speaking a language he is acting, it boosts so much the inmersion. Is interesting that he can borrow the abilities but it really makes you wonder why him of all people and why all of a sudden!
I hope the thieft guy regrets for sure this time. I got a feeling the MC may either kill him for being the actual reason they got target in the first place or help him and maybe even becoming his first friend considering the guy now has no family left and his uncle and aunt were so nice with MC...
Hitting him is actually a good idea. She only has 2 choices and she wouldn't like to punch a person that has actually been good to her instead of those 2 of course considering he actually wants her to stay with him unlike those 2. That's the reason. Is not masoquism but a way for her to actually...
Good pacing
Actually, makes you care about the protagonist and explians how she feels and is justified as well to show that even a person who lives in a fairytale reach a point where reality hits and there's no salvation specially in a world like the one she's in!
Also let's you know that her...
AN UPDATE???! YEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSS!!! I'VE WAITED SO LONG FOR THIS MOMENT I HOPE YOU CONTINUE IT!!
Is not messy at all, I'n fact I actually felt like it was really nice in both quality and very understandable. You did a great job! Hope to see more of this and you in the future!
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR REVIVING THIS!!! AT THIS POINT I DON'T CARE ABOUT CONSISTENCY AS LONG AS THERE IS A KIND SOUL THAT DEVOTES TO TRANSLATE THIS!! THANK YOU!! Go at your own pace, is fine!