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    Teisou Gyakuten Sekai no Doutei Henkyou Ryoushu Kishi - Ch. 12 - Valhalla

    The male maids were exposition, as well as to explain that Faust's main motivation was to preserve his family legacy as well as protect his people. Every major female character in the story so far, and many of the lesser characters, have wanted to jump him. In other words, we are seeing a lot of...
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    Teisou Gyakuten Sekai no Doutei Henkyou Ryoushu Kishi - Ch. 12 - Valhalla

    That is the usual issue of an author telling, not showing. There should have been more characters that weren't attracted to Faust for one reason or another, and imo, the revelation of some of the four should only be hinted at this early on given how tied into politics that is. I will say that...
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    Shi ni Modori Reijou wa, Kanpeki na Shiawase wo Teniireta - Vol. 2 Ch. 4 - The Noble Lady Violetta Martin, Who Returned from Death, Gave Up on Being …

    Yeah, I think it would be better if he didn't loop as well, and rather he fell for her because she focused on improving herself and avoiding the whole engagement. There is even the third plot thread of the prince improving himself as well.
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    Otonari no Oneesan ni Arekore sareru Manga - Vol. 1 Ch. 4

    I'm just curious as to what her goal is. If she understands that he might come to hate her, then why is she doing all this stuff that makes him want to shut her out of his life?
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    Training Regimes of the World’s Strongest Women - Vol. 10 Ch. 62 - Dance Hall

    Sure, but the author definitely wrote this with pseudo NTR in mind. The constant switch between the girls worried about him, while Cross is dancing with Seras, after Seras compared dancing to intercourse. Giselle just had the misfortune of being the one to think too hard about it, that we've...
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    Shi ni Modori Reijou wa, Kanpeki na Shiawase wo Teniireta - Vol. 2 Ch. 2 - The Saint Banishes the Nightmare

    There are too many cop outs here. He leaves her for the commoner, but the demon had the power to brainwash. The commoner girl was actually a demon in the first place. It being all his plan. She says plainly that their relationship was combative, that she really didn't feel much for him in the...
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    Kizetsu Yuusha to Ansatsu Hime - Vol. 5 Ch. 36 - Exorcism Duel!?

    She has a pretty extreme reaction to Toto being potentially dead here. She is getting stuff, but it is more background. She also has the least need for direct development, since she was already had a code and desire to help kids. She could accomplish the same goal by saving up money to use for...
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    Training Regimes of the World's Strongest Women - Vol. 9 Ch. 61 - Two Weeks To Polish A Rough Gem

    The tree house looks copy pasted in some of the zoomed out panels, almost like a decal on the tree instead of actually on it. They needed to emphasize some branches underneath it or something. Otherwise, I like it. Really stylish and stupid in a fun way. Egos more than likely. They made it to...
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    Akuyaku Reijou Tensei Oji-san - Vol. 5 Ch. 34.5 - Memories of Pudding

    Don't forget he wears his hair like that on purpose. It helped him deal with someone when he wore a prop that had that hair style, and his hair was already thinning, so he just went with it instead of trying to fight it.
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    Shi ni Modori Reijou wa, Kanpeki na Shiawase wo Teniireta - Vol. 2 Ch. 1 - The Timid Young Lady and the Frog’s Guidance

    Yeah, I think there is a three volume story there. Not too long, just enough to expand on what is there.
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    Jitsu wa Ore, Saikyou deshita? - Ch. 126 - The Royal Family's Position

    I think his mom destroyed any support base he had. Unfortunate, because he was actually alright.
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    Tensei Arasaa Joshi no Kotoyo Kaikatsu - Seiryaku Kekkon wa Iya na no de, Zatsugaku Chishiki de Tanoshii Kaikaku Life wo Kekkou Shichaimasu! - Vol. 3…

    Her response to her maid being in mortal peril was to take a mace and smack a monster in the face. It didn't work, but she definitely doesn't see herself as a four year old.
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    Make Heroine o Katasetai!! - Ch. 7 - I Want to Stop the Sick Visit Event!

    When you choose the wrong wingman and he ends up with your rival and the love interest while doing his absolute best to get you set up.
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    Choudokyuu Cheat Akuyaku Reijou no Karei Naru Fukushuutan - Vol. 6 Ch. 24 - Capture Target Characters

    The One Within the Villainess used the confrontation as the final bit of pay off. This manga is trying to use the confrontation as the major conflict, which kind of works. I think that more of the story should have been dedicated to setting up what they were doing, so it comes off like a proper...
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    Training Regimes of the World's Strongest Women - Vol. 9 Ch. 60 - The Treasure of Almeria

    I am a bit disappointed that she got him while he was out in the open instead of when he was hidden behind all those defenses. Yeah, prime opportunity, but come on. Where is the challenge? For someone that skilled, he might as well have jumped into her arms.
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