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    Teisou Gyakuten Sekai Nara Moteru to Omotte Itara - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

    There would be some potential for this premise if they actually played around with the idea that if there is a 1:20 sex ratio, and women are incredibly randy, then there would be some weird stuff about it. Like, them acting like the stereotypical "prince" type would make sense if they are...
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    Otonari no Oneesan ni Arekore sareru - Vol. 1 Ch. 18

    They did the fake out with the guy, now it happens to the diligent girl. To be fair, though, per his own comments, she is more his type.
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    Ore Igai Dare mo Saishu Dekinai Sozai na no ni "Sozai Saishuritsu ga Hikui" to Pawahara suru Osananajimi Renkinjutsushi to Zetsuen shita Senzoku Mado…

    That is a neat plot point, but the way it is delivered is trash, and the only thing I can think of for how it fits is to point out that Ezekiel's suffering had a point. Something that she should have been told well before now, and well before she tortured the demon queen. EDIT: it also messes...
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    Choudokyuu Cheat Akuyaku Reijou no Karei Naru Fukushuutan - Vol. 7 Ch. 26 - So You Do Remember?

    The original servants were still servants of the family. It was still a trash development, but there is a difference between a servant being unable to do anything until someone higher up says "enough" and the queen letting things slide until the entire thing comes to light in public.
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    Choudokyuu Cheat Akuyaku Reijou no Karei Naru Fukushuutan - Vol. 7 Ch. 26 - So You Do Remember?

    Royal and other high ranking parents would leave that to tutors and the various servants for the most part. I'm pretty sure, given that noble women ran the household while noble men were expected to be more outwardly focused, the education of the royal children would be her responsibility, in...
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    Otonari no Oneesan ni Arekore sareru - Vol. 1 Ch. 12

    Because a new guy showing up trying to sleep with the FL is done to death. This guy is also not really interested in her, so I'm really just rooting for him to find a different love interest.
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    Akuyaku Reijou Tensei Ojisan - Vol. 6 Ch. 39 - Halloween!

    That is a really creative costume, and good use of magic to make something special. Too often with things like this, there isn't any creativity applied.
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    Virgin Knight: I Became the Frontier Lord in a World Ruled by Women - Ch. 12 - Valhalla

    The male maids were exposition, as well as to explain that Faust's main motivation was to preserve his family legacy as well as protect his people. Every major female character in the story so far, and many of the lesser characters, have wanted to jump him. In other words, we are seeing a lot of...
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    Virgin Knight: I Became the Frontier Lord in a World Ruled by Women - Ch. 12 - Valhalla

    That is the usual issue of an author telling, not showing. There should have been more characters that weren't attracted to Faust for one reason or another, and imo, the revelation of some of the four should only be hinted at this early on given how tied into politics that is. I will say that...
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    Shi ni Modori Reijou wa, Kanpeki na Shiawase wo Teniireta - Vol. 2 Ch. 4 - The Noble Lady Violetta Martin, Who Returned from Death, Gave Up on Being …

    Yeah, I think it would be better if he didn't loop as well, and rather he fell for her because she focused on improving herself and avoiding the whole engagement. There is even the third plot thread of the prince improving himself as well.
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    Otonari no Oneesan ni Arekore sareru - Vol. 1 Ch. 4

    I'm just curious as to what her goal is. If she understands that he might come to hate her, then why is she doing all this stuff that makes him want to shut her out of his life?
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    Training Regimes of the World’s Strongest Women - Vol. 10 Ch. 62 - Dance Hall

    Sure, but the author definitely wrote this with pseudo NTR in mind. The constant switch between the girls worried about him, while Cross is dancing with Seras, after Seras compared dancing to intercourse. Giselle just had the misfortune of being the one to think too hard about it, that we've...
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    Shi ni Modori Reijou wa, Kanpeki na Shiawase wo Teniireta - Vol. 2 Ch. 2 - The Saint Banishes the Nightmare

    There are too many cop outs here. He leaves her for the commoner, but the demon had the power to brainwash. The commoner girl was actually a demon in the first place. It being all his plan. She says plainly that their relationship was combative, that she really didn't feel much for him in the...
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    Kizetsu Yuusha to Ansatsu Hime - Vol. 5 Ch. 36 - Exorcism Duel!?

    She has a pretty extreme reaction to Toto being potentially dead here. She is getting stuff, but it is more background. She also has the least need for direct development, since she was already had a code and desire to help kids. She could accomplish the same goal by saving up money to use for...
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