Significantly better translation! One thing I would recommend, though, is adding a TL Note page for historical context, like the songs and the show referenced at the beginning. That, and this’ll be the same quality as Fallen Angel’s scanlations!
Why do people always just glaze scanlators that pick up dropped series' without actually valuing the quality of the TL? This was absolute ass; way too many terms went untranslated in favor of TL notes, punctuation was super shoddy, there were grammar mistakes and just basic spelling mistakes...
I was already only half-invested in this story, considering it's pretty much just hentai with a sorta-plot, but man, these TLs have absolutely obliterated any enjoyment I had out of this. Straight up incomprehensible.
No offense, but please get someone who's actually fluent in English to...
It's weird to me that people would find this cute. Like, this is literally just someone with manic depression/bipolar disorder. In one morning, going from super happy about hanging out, to playing out detailed anti-fantasies about all her friends leaving her such that she's left crying... like...
I don’t know why more people don’t like this series. It’s straightforward, doesn’t play any emotional games, it’s full of fluff where you want it and good emotional situations for our emotionally underdeveloped characters when you need it… this is peak SoL.
I don't know if maybe I'm just a bit eepy, but this chapter felt like a whirlwind. Like, a lot of things happened all at once in a not-super-satisfying way.
I'll have to reread it when the next chapter comes out to have more fleshed out context, and I'll see how I feel about it then.
Gah, as much as I want to read this, the TL is absolutely incomprehensible. So many dangling words, weird formatting errors...
It especially sucks because the redraw is so good. I wish someone a bit more capable picked up this series.