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“We had a premarital kiss. Take responsibility and have children with me.”

I agree. I feel that the pacing after Ch 3 was a bit rushed. It felt like we barely had any time in the brothel. It also felt like we barely had any time with Travis to properly establish how trustworthy he is, he kinda just, appears, and Sherry just rolls with it. I feel that pacing a bit too...

Thank you for the suggestion!!!!

I thought so too ngl.

Ah gotcha, you make a fair point.

So, she likely means “let’s wrap this up” in the sense of “alright thats enough being missing for now, time to go back to the capital.” Remember that she was kidnapped, and also carried a pendant that basically signaled to her family that she wasn’t dead, so she’s probably going to be heading...

Please let me know your thoughts and suggestions.

Thanks! I’ll definitely keep you in mind. For now, I’d like to stick to solo work, as I currently don’t want to have someone work with me on volunteer work, as 1) t feels like it should definitely be compensated in some form and 2) I do this as a hobby and would find it difficult to take other...

We have not.

Haha the campaign had a bug where if you died, it dropped frames all the way down to 30fps, and in order to fix it, you need to back out the main menu. Since the campaign is a separate app, (like Delta Force and CoD), it immediately put me in a 4500 player queue.

Thanks for the suggestion!

I already have one, i started it when i first started the 2nd ch. thanks for the suggestion though!

Nah, I get you. I only break the words up the way I do mostly because of space constraints. I do occasionally change up what the translated sentences are if it’s something that doesn’t really fit properly or is redundant. Same with any non-English idioms. I did it a lot in the first chapter...

Yeah i know, but because of the program i use, i don’t really have the luxury of being able to change the spacing. There are ways around the limitations but for now, its the best solution given the circumstances. The do plan on eventually exploring new programs but at the moment I will make do...

To me, it seems like her and Travis are going to A) use the brothel to make Santal better than Clinted and B) to put Mirelda in her place. Prince is probably gonna be peeved that she’s doing better in the brothel than in Clinted and is probably gonna try and sabotage them, leading to a...