i need to take a look on how hypertension can directly affects blood sugar because while it is still unclear whether reading this much sugar can affect one's true blood sugar level it is for sure causes a spike in blood pressure due to the excitement and adrenaline.
man. turns out biochemistry...
it's nice knowing i'm the 5th person who commented about how we dont believe the "heroine" for even a second.
and there are only four comments before mine
holy shit i'm actually impressed. the translation quality went SO MUCH better in the span of mere two chapters.
all i can say here, is that some parts can be shortened. nobody wants to read one text bubble for too long, although it's not always possible (an example is in "i'd love nothing more...
so a speck of bitcoin vs a pound of painite.
one is more available but volatile and weak af while the other can stop demonic invasion with mere words. that girl aint winning no shit 🥀
there has to be a much better person for this but i guess sure until you found the better person. although i'd just point out places to improve here in the comments whenever i found them since i'm not that experienced in qc.
heck, you might even spot them by yourself eventually since you're...
i did notice a lot of improvements in the latest chapter. that's great and needs to be appreciated. however i'd like to mention that while it's already good for a translation, it's still not adequate for a good work of art translation. instead of "you don't stand a chance", you can put something...
so uh, assuming you speak English at least as your second language, please proofread it. would be even easier if you're also the one doing typesetting.
you can just read it and look for "oh this sounds weird" feeling. there's a reason why WCT's Re: Zero WN mtl, for example, is still enjoyable.
quite an amazing premise, i must say. hell yeah added.
(no, this is definitely not about me going crazy over how cute Sheryl is every single time i see the credit page. yes. truly. obviously. right...?)