No doubt Author-san will be blessed by the Heavens and will recover soon after gifting us with such sweetness.
How cool would it be if Sempai and Hitomi's parents set them up for an arranged marriage to each other, without having any idea that they were sweet on each other?
Bro is best wing-man, so why do I always get a villain vibe from him whenever he makes an appearance? I mean he's done everything to hook the MC and his sister up (that's legal anyway), so why does he have such a bad guy vibe?
The one thing this arc has managed to accomplish is to make me truly curious as to the background of the husband. I'll keep following at least until his back story comes to light, then we'll see.
Husband has the right attitude for fighting. You don't let the enemy run away, you hold on with a death-grip until he's beaten. If it costs him his life, take your enemy with you as an honor guard, or don't engage at all.