i love this. I'd give 7/10 star. the only thing it lacks is the end. the end is great. however it lacks something.
for examples, Gaya's mom. what happened to her? she's in the hospital as far as im concerned so will they ever meet again?
Eri's tutor. what happened to him? i was expecting to...
swept by the river doesn't mean they're dead. they could be unconscious. plus, they didnt fall directly on a solid rock. they fall in a river, no?
regarding the treatment, before they both jump off the cliff, the cop told gaya and erin that he already found the evidence of Gaya's father abusive...