Oi author, your little detective stories are ok and everything, but nothing we haven't seen before. It's fun, but give me more character depth, growth and interactions. If you'd used this whole chapter as a conclusion for the previous situation, it would've been perfect. Her being unconscious in...
Well this was stupid? "Let's not waste anymore time!" and then proceeds to do exactly that...
Also, wasn't it more logical to save all the villagers first, hide them somewhere and THEN go to the dungeon. This makes little sense to me...
Giving prisoners as slaves to another city? Are you for real? Labor force is precious especially in those days, you make them pay their dues in your city, you don't give them away so easily...
Also "How do you know my name?" what do you mean how!!?? How many 10-12 year-olds have your...
I dare say that this author is an id*ot and I'm an even bigger one for reading this so far...
The scene where he heals everyone should have more to it, like him getting some info from them while asking how they were injured or some such. You know, a bit of substance to the scene rather than just...
This story is going places! and I don't know how to feel about it...
Overall, I really don't know how to feel about it? It's not bad, I like it and I don't, it's interesting, but bogged down by the authors inexperience (I guess?). Really mixed feelings. Would still recommend people to at least...
I like this story, but the thing that irks me the most is how they represented an 8 year old boy (Lutz) as a more mature person who gives her advice and calms her down all the time, as opposed to her who's supposed to be a ~20 year-old inside... Why is she acting so childish is beyond me. Just...
This was a very fun read and the art was beautiful! They achieved their goal of making me want check out the novel. GG
Thank you for the great translation, too.