I don't mind the story writing / pacing too much
but the art style really could do some tweaking. Feel like the details that matter blur in with what doesn't matter, it's a mess imo.
Knowing nothing about your wife for 10 years, and not even including her in events happening at the same house and vehemently rejecting anything she says while trying to know the husband better doesn't excuse brief moments of kindness.
She's plain and simple broken down.
She lost her spirit and motivation during her time in the original world, and once you're caught in that deep negativity pool it takes a lot of work to muster any willpower at all.
I recognise a lot, even if we arrived at the despair differently. It's not...