As someone who read the LN first, the artist made two chars into lolis? Also, he didnt know what happened to his childhood friend other than that she died and it was a bit of a point later on that made him wonder just exactly she experienced, so that scene in the first chapter wasn't necessary...
Page 7 - There should be a comma after the word party
Page 9 - Enterance should be entrance
Page 13 - "The reason I doesn't" should be "The reason I don't"
Page 14 - There should be a space inbetween "in" and "a"
Page 17 - "Somethings' " should be "Something's"
Page 33 - "It was different..." ->...
@kaezeribato Well, it's still important to talk with your partner to know what your partner thinks. Just to clear things up. But yeah, I prefer going through the dating without the label first.
@Yautja lmao dude. Your audacity to think of yourself as well-spoken and well-thought out is completely laughable. Especially since you completely missed the point and ignored the sample sentence which showed what a tame and neutral response is. Why did you ignore the sample sentence? Did you...