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@kaezeribato Well, it's still important to talk with your partner to know what your partner thinks. Just to clear things up. But yeah, I prefer going through the dating without the label first.
@Yautja lmao dude. Your audacity to think of yourself as well-spoken and well-thought out is completely laughable. Especially since you completely missed the point and ignored the sample sentence which showed what a tame and neutral response is. Why did you ignore the sample sentence? Did you...
@Yautja lmao dude. "If anyone is being toxic, it's you my guy. If you read what I said in a completely neutral voice, it's pretty damn tame." Are you for real?
"Improved translations are good and all, but really? 8 fucking months later, for a chapter long since past? At least have it accompany...