This one has to be my favorite so far. Love the dynamic between these two. For a GL anthology, it's wild how little actual GL there's been in it lol. I have to squint for most of it.
This plot point is infuriating. There's no reason she needs to meet up with her mom. Yeah, it's her choice now, but why on earth would you ever suggest for a kid to meet up with their abuser? To find out her birthday? Even if the mom knows and for some reason neglected to tell Melody all this...
Hmm. i think when Leon said "run away with Elizabeth", it would make more sense if it was translated as "elope with Elizabeth". As then the King's reaction of "where did you even learn that word" is actually applicable. There are many other weird translations, too. Thank you for your hard work, tho!
Oh dang, if the story expands to her going to Europe, I'm all for that. Maybe this will go towards the the road of her reforming everything to the point of world peace, eventually becoming a Saint.
Huh. I expected the sex, but not like this. This is almost as bad as “sex pollen”. Like I would get it if like rubbing got them into the mood, not straight up “fornicate or you die”.
Cute overall, but...i know it's for the sake of like pacing for the oneshot but just switching engagement plans outta the blue w/o consulting their partner (or even showing/hinting that the girls remotely are starting to get feelings for the other brother) like that is quite rude. Like, the...