That little tidbit at the end about how this is what happens when you prevent an epidemic, that one is very insightful and true.
It's a struggle for preventative medicine to get any funding, that is in spite of preventative medicine being both multiple times more effective and dozens of times...
The story was fine until now, but this is just appalling writing. Really, even thought the attack was predicted and he had the item in his hands he "somehow" let the enemy just grab an item from his hand without putting it on himself. After ALREADY KNOWING HE WAS SABOTAGING HIM DURING THE FIGHT...
It's just so frustrating how Japanese manga seem to revere being a pathetic spineless guy when it comes to women. It's not even about the yandere types it's also all the "I'm embarrassed so I slap you in the face even though it's my own mistake" scenes. After which they obviously go and...
I presume it means if she properly moves her base of operation to the capitol city, so she'd have to become an active adventurer there instead (and any other medieval requirements there were for moving to another nobles territory).
The story came, delivered exactly what it promised, refused to elaborate, and then left. Absolute chads. 9/10 would read again (though hopefully with a few more chapters next time).
I want to read ahead in the novel but there are no chapter for it on novelupdates. Does anyone know if the 7 completed volumes have been translated into english and where to find them?
I have dealt with depression and abuse in the past myself and this chapter sent shivers down my spine. That's the kind of thing you don't even dare dream of in a situation like this. Just the thought alone would scare you lest reality will disappoint you.
If it's a first time and you tried this yourself then I'd say this is a good first try. Don't mind the rest most of us are spoiled by very skilled and well made manga's, so just be proud of your first work!
There's plenty of free guides to help you improve your work so give those a shot, and...
For those like me who want to read ahead using the novel: you should start at chapter 30. While it covers part of what's in the last chapter as well there's some notable additions that are worth reading.